Storyform for "Here Comes Mr. Jordan"

CHARACTER DYNAMICS:

  • MC RESOLVE: Steadfast
  • MC GROWTH: Stop
  • MC APPROACH: Do-er
  • MC PROBLEM-SOLVING STYLE: Logical
  • IC RESOLVE: Change

PLOT DYNAMICS:

  • DRIVER: Action
  • LIMIT: Optionlock
  • OUTCOME: Success
  • JUDGMENT: Good

OVERALL STORY (Finding a Body for The Boxer)

  • THROUGHLINE: Situation
  • CONCERN: The Future
  • ISSUE: Openness vs. Preconception
  • PROBLEM: Disbelief
  • SOLUTION: Faith
  • SYMPTOM: Reconsider
  • RESPONSE: Consider
  • CATALYST: Delay
  • INHIBITOR: Approach
  • BENCHMARK: The Past
  • SIGNPOST 1: How Things are Changing
  • SIGNPOST 2: The Future
  • SIGNPOST 3: The Present
  • SIGNPOST 4: The Past

IMPACT CHARACTER (Bette Logan)

  • THROUGHLINE: Manipulation
  • CONCERN: Changing One's Nature
  • ISSUE: Rationalization vs. Obligation
  • PROBLEM: Disbelief
  • SOLUTION: Faith
  • SYMPTOM: Avoidance
  • RESPONSE: Pursuit
  • UNIQUE ABILITY: Commitment
  • CRITICAL FLAW: Closure
  • BENCHMARK: Developing a Plan
  • SIGNPOST 1: Conceiving an Idea
  • SIGNPOST 2: Developing a Plan
  • SIGNPOST 3: Playing a Role
  • SIGNPOST 4: Changing One's Nature

MAIN CHARACTER (Joe Pendleton)

  • THROUGHLINE: Activity
  • CONCERN: Obtaining
  • ISSUE: Approach vs. Attitude
  • PROBLEM: Feeling
  • SOLUTION: Logic
  • SYMPTOM: Reconsider
  • RESPONSE: Consider
  • UNIQUE ABILITY: Self Interest
  • CRITICAL FLAW: Openness
  • BENCHMARK: Understanding
  • SIGNPOST 1: Gathering Information
  • SIGNPOST 2: Obtaining
  • SIGNPOST 3: Understanding
  • SIGNPOST 4: Doing

MAIN VS. IMPACT STORY (The love story)

  • THROUGHLINE: Fixed Attitude
  • CONCERN: Innermost Desires
  • ISSUE: Closure vs. Denial
  • PROBLEM: Avoidance
  • SOLUTION: Pursuit
  • SYMPTOM: Reconsider
  • RESPONSE: Consider
  • CATALYST: Hope
  • INHIBITOR: Rationalization
  • BENCHMARK: Memories
  • SIGNPOST 1: Impulsive Responses
  • SIGNPOST 2: Innermost Desires
  • SIGNPOST 3: Contemplation
  • SIGNPOST 4: Memories

ADDITIONAL STORY POINTS

  • GOAL: The Future
  • CONSEQUENCE: Innermost Desires
  • COST: Changing One's Nature
  • DIVIDEND: Obtaining
  • REQUIREMENT: The Past
  • PREREQUISITE: Memories
  • PRECONDITION: Developing a Plan
  • FOREWARNINGS: Understanding

VOCABULARY:

Action: in terms of the Overall plot, actions force decisions

Activity: an activity or endeavor

Approach: one's methodology of doing or being

Attitude: demeanor or outlook

Avoidance: stepping around, preventing or escaping from a problem

Change: Joe Pendleton changes his essential nature while attempting to solve the problem

Changing One's Nature: transforming one's nature

Closure: bringing something to an end or to completion

Commitment: a decision to stick with something regardless of the consequences

Conceiving an Idea: coming up with an idea

Consider: weigh pros and cons

Contemplation: present considerations

Delay: putting off until later

Denial: the refusal to admit to oneself or others that a previously held view is no longer true

Developing a Plan: visualizing how an existing idea might be implemented

Disbelief: the belief that something is untrue

Do-er: Joe Pendleton looks for a physical solution to his problem

Doing: engaging in a physical activity

Faith: accepting something as certain without proof

Feeling: an emotional sense of how things are going

Fixed Attitude: a fixed attitude or outlook

Gathering Information: gathering information or experience

Good: Joe Pendleton ultimately succeeds in resolving his personal problems

Hope: a desired future that falls within reasonable expectations

How Things are Changing: the way things are going

Impulsive Responses: innate responses

Innermost Desires: basic drives and desires

Logic: a rational sense of how things are related

Logical: Joe Pendleton uses inherently logical (linear) problem solving techniques

Manipulation: a manner of thinking or demeanor

Memories: recollections

Obligation: accepting a task or situation in exchange for someone's earlier or potential favors

Obtaining: achieving or possessing something

Openness: willingness to reevaluate

Optionlock: the story climax occurs because all options have been exhausted

Playing a Role: temporarily adopting a lifestyle

Preconception: adhering to a previous held view; unwillingness to reevaluate

Pursuit: the drive to seek after

Rationalization: an alternative explanation used to mask the real reason

Reconsider: thinking through again

Self Interest: doing or being based on what is best for oneself

Situation: a situation or environment

Steadfast: Joe Pendleton ultimately retains his essential nature

Stop: regarding Joe Pendleton, the audience is waiting for something to end

Success: the original goal is achieved

The Future: what will happen or what will be

The Past: what has already happened

The Present: the current situation and circumstances

Understanding: appreciating the meaning of something

 

 

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