Dramatica Users
Group Movie Analysis:
"Romeo
and Juliet"
Review by Katharine
E. Monahan Huntley
Writer/director
Baz Luhrman's 1996 adaptation of Romeo and Juliet invigorates
Shakespeare's first tragedy. The experimental filmmaking with its postmodern
storyencoding successfully delivers the star-crossed lovers to
the MTV generation, making Romeo and Juliet most excellent required
viewing-instead of the mandatory abstruse high school assignment.
Scholars often attribute
ownership of the Shakespearean tragedy to obstacle character,
Juliet. From a Dramatica perspective, however, the story truly belongs
to its main character, Romeo. The dynamics and elements
of which he is comprised, and the appreciations that are attached
to his throughline, dovetail beautifully to create a complex
character fully invested in his domain.
Romeo is a be-er
in his approach to conflict, a key reason why his concern
of preconscious-acting without thinking-causes problems for him.
When it would serve him best to be, he is impulsive, for example, if
he had remained in Mantua awaiting word from Friar Lawrence instead
leaving his exiled state in haste, the story may have ended differently.
(Of course, this is only one of the many "What ifs?")
That Romeo is at
odds with himself is also illustrated in his problem of wanting
immediate results without taking time to go through the process
(mc solution) to achieve his desire (mc critical flaw),
and his focus upon what is not quite right, the inaccuracies
and intolerances (non-accurate), that dot his throughline.
The following are
illustrations of the essential dynamic and objective story thematic
questions for a Dramatica storyform. A complete analysis of the Shakespearean
play will be available in the next Dramatica software program update:
Character Dynamics
Resolve
Romeo remains
steadfast in his love for Juliet and desire to remain at her
side-to the point of following his wife in death.
Growth
Romeo has to start
acting like the man that Juliet is certain he can be.
Approach
Romeo's first
preference in approaching a conflict is to adapt himself to the environment
(be-er), for example, he lacks interest in the (contentious)
" . . . activities of his gang of friends, whom he accompanies
only reluctantly to the Capulet feast: 'I'll be a candle holder and
look on'" (1.4.38) (Paster 258); After making Juliet his wife,
he tries to placate Tybalt rather than fight him; and so forth.
Mental Sex
Romeo uses cause
and effect problem solving techniques (male mental sex). As
an example, in his first scene with Benvolio, he explains Rosaline's
cold heart is the cause of his morose behavior-he does not look beyond
this to determine the real reason for his unhappiness-that he has
not yet found true love.
OC Resolve
Juliet changes
from the Capulet's dutiful daughter to wife of Romeo. She has a mind
of her own with no one, save Friar Lawrence, to guide her. As an example,
she looks to the woman who raised her for advice: "At her crisis,
when Juliet asks her to be wise, the Nurse can only suggest bigamy,
a course quite in keeping with the values she herself is made of.
Here the Nurse is no longer funny, but she has not changed. It is
Juliet who has done that" (Bryant lxxiv).
Plot Dynamics
Driver
The "three
civil brawls" (1.1.91) the Capulets and Montagues have engaged
in force Prince Escalus to determine: "If you ever disturb our
streets again,/Your lives shall pay the forfeit of the peace"
(1.1.98-99), thus action drives the story forward. Gibbons
asserts: "In Romeo and Juliet the play's decisive events occur
with instantaneous suddenness: servants brawl on sight, the lovers
fall in love at first sight, the shock of the tragic catastrophe converts
the parents suddenly and completely from hate to love" (70).
Limit
With their two
only children dead (optionlock), the Montagues and Capulets
come to their senses and reconcile.
Outcome
The grief stricken
Capulets and Montagues reconcile (success), horrified the ancient
grudge has resulted in their children's deaths:
PRINCE:
A glooming peace this morning with it brings. The sun for sorrow
will not show his head (5.3.316-317).
Judgment
Romeo ultimately
fails (bad) in his efforts to live happily ever after with
his "heart's dear love" (2.3.61)-"For never was a story
of more woe/Than this of Juliet and her Romeo" (5.3.320-21).
Objective Story
Domain
Problems in the
objective story are derived from activities and endeavors (physics),
principally to do with the ancient grudge between the Capulets and
Montagues, and Friar Lawrence's attempt to reconcile the two families.
Gibbons explains:
Shakespeare makes
the plot depend crucially on messages. He invents the episode in which
Romeo, Benvolio, and Mercutio learn by accident from Capulet's illiterate
servant of the proposed ball. This scheme is repeated when the Nurse
haphazardly encounters the young gallants, and Romeo lightheartedly
identifies himself amidst the bawdy mockery of his friends. Later,
the Nurse brings Juliet a happy reply (II,v). In the second, tragic,
movement of the play, the Nurse brings Juliet the news of Tybalt's
death and Romeo's banishment . . . . Shakespeare stresses in both
scenes the ease with which messages can go wrong; so Juliet at first
thinks it is Romeo, not Tybalt, whom the Nurse saw bedaubed in gore-blood.
. . . In the closing movement of the play Balthasar brings Romeo the
false report of Juliet's death (v.i); immediately afterwards, as Romeo
leaves the stage by one door, bearing a phail of poison, Friar John
enters by another to begin the next scene by telling Friar Laurence
how he failed to get through with the message that Juliet is drugged,
not dead. (41-42)
Objective Story
Concern
The objective
characters are concerned with engaging in battles of wits, wills,
and physical strength-much for the sake of a "quarrel between
the two families (doing) . . . so ancient that the original
motives are no longer even discussed. Inspired by the 'fiery' Tybalt,
factionalism pursues its mindless course despite the efforts of the
Prince to end it" (Bevington xxii).
Objective Story
Issue
Thematic issues
regarding experience in the objective story are illustrated
in terms of age. This is seen particularly in Lord Capulet and Nurse,
both who think they know what's best for Juliet, and Friar Lawrence,
who counsels the young lovers.
Objective Story
Problem
Expectations
the objective characters
have for one another create problems. An illustration of this is seen
in Paris, Juliet's prospective bridegroom. Capulet has granted permission
for the young man to court and marry his daughter-when Juliet refuses
the suit, Capulet is outraged and abusive.
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