Movie Analysis:
"Brothers
& Sisters:
American
History X & Hilary and Jackie"
Review by Katharine
E. Monahan Huntley
American
History X, written by David McKenna and directed by Tony Kaye
(also the cinematographer), is a highly polished presentation of an
ugly subject: the rhetoric of hate. The fine acting of Edward Norton
and Edward Furlong extricates the film from a cliché driven script.
From a Dramatica perspective, it is a particularly good illustration
of how concerns and benchmarks relate in the four throughlines.
The objective
story domain is examined in psychology. Divergent thinking
and manipulations, both subtle and overt, are problematic. Skinheads,
under the leadership of white supremacist Cameron Alexander, control
Venice Beach. The LAPD is working with Venice Beach High's charismatic
and African American principal, Dr. Robert Sweeney, in conceptualizing
(os concern) a way to eradicate their intolerable presence. The
plan entails convincing Cameron's protégé, Derek Vinyard
(protagonist and obstacle character), to take their side.
Derek is a former pupil of Sweeney's. At one time he was open to his
mentor's ideas (os benchmark-conceiving)-that is until
his revered (and racist) father dissuaded his impressionable son from
following the leader.
Derek's firefighter
father is killed in a drive by, leaving the teen vulnerable to the influence
of Cameron-manifested when Derek deliberately and viciously wastes Crips
gang members carjacking his truck. Without the eyewitness testimony
of his fourteen year-old brother, Daniel, he only serves three years
jail time. His release from Chino starts the objective story (oc
benchmark-present).
The same day as
Derek's release, Daniel, a student at Venice Beach High is in the principal's
office: " . . . arguing for Hitler as a civil rights hero"
in his history paper "My Mein Kamph." Outraged, Sweeney conceives
(os benchmark) of a way to make Daniel think (mc solution)
about his fixed mindset (mc domain), and charges Daniel
to give a written account of the past three years (mc concern-memory):
"I want you to analyze and interpret all the events surrounding
Derek's incarceration. How these events helped shape your present perspective
(mc direction) concerning life in contemporary America. The impact
on your life-your family's."
The most vivid throughline
is explored in the subjective story domain (physics) where
the concern is understanding. Derek has returned as head
of the household. He has undergone a profound change in Chino, and no
longer wants himself nor Daniel to take any part in the skinhead movement.
Each new piece of information Derek offers Daniel (ss benchmark-learning)
of what had happened to him in jail (oc concern-past), combined
with Daniel's own recollections (mc concern), creates
a new consciousness (mc benchmark) in the boy. This ultimately
culminates in Daniel fully appreciating the knowledge (ss
problem) he and Derek had shared no longer holds true.
There is no happy
ending to celebrate this realization (mc resolve-change). Daniel
is fatally shot in the high school boys' room-an explosive action
(story driver) separate and apart from the objective story (mc
critical flaw-fate). Derek, cradling his dead brother's bloody body,
however, understands all too well the pivotal role he has played
in Daniel's senseless death: "Oh God, What'd I do? Oh God. Oh God."
In Daniel's voiceover
the tragedy is underscored-as he posthumously reads the conclusion to
his American History X paper:
DANIEL:
So I guess this is where I tell you what I learned (ss benchmark).
My conclusion, right? Well, my conclusion is: hate is baggage. Life's
too short to be pissed off all the time. It's just not worth it. Derek
says it's always good to end a paper with a quote. He says someone
else has already said it best, so if you can't top it, steal from
them and go out strong:
"We are
not enemies but friends. We must not be enemies. Though passion may
have strained, it must not break our bonds of affection. The mystic
chords of memory (mc concern) will swell when again
touched, as surely they will be by the better angels of our nature
(judgment-good)."
Story
engine settings for American History X.
The above quotation
has meaning for another pair of siblings, Hilary and Jacqueline du Pré
in Hilary and Jackie. The film, written by Frank Cottrell Boyce
and directed by Anand Tucker, is based upon the biographical book A
Genius in the Family-by Hilary and Piers du Pré. Emily Watson
(Jackie) and Rachel Griffiths (Hilary) are mesmerizing as-in different
instances-the main and obstacle characters.
Not quite a Dramatica
grand argument, it does, however, offer a powerful subjective
story. Talented (but not exceptionally so) Hilary subverts her own
spotlight in acquiescence of her sister's brilliant cellist career-sacrificing
her spirit to prop up Jackie's. The storyweaving includes a detached
view of the subjective story-as well as each sister's Rashomonesque
perspective of the relationship.
Hilary and Jackie
are reminiscent of best friends Nel and Sula in Toni Morrison's Sula
(see story example in Dramatica 3.0 software)-both relationships are
tightly wound-both are rent apart by a man. Ultimately, their amazing
affinity overcomes all betrayal.
If there is an objective
story, it is set in the world of classical music competition (os
domain-physics), and really only serves as a backdrop to the psychological
(ss domain) conflict that occurs between two sisters who are
at once both ordinary and extraordinary.
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