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The
Catbird Seat
by James Thurber
A Short Story Analysis
by Katharine Monahan Huntley
Merriam-Webster's
Encyclopedia of Literature defines the short story as:
Brief fictional
prose narrative to be distinguished from longer, more expansive narrative
forms such as the novel, epic, saga, and romance. The short story is
usually concerned with a single effect conveyed in a single significant
episode or scene and involving a limited number of characters, sometimes
only one. The form encourages economy of setting and concise narration;
character is disclosed in action and dramatic encounter but seldom fully
developed. A short story may concentrate on the creation of mood rather
than the telling of story. (1028)
For the above stated
reasons, the short story does not usually lend itself to a Dramatica grand
argument. Moreover, there often is not enough "real estate"
to properly explore all four throughlines. Nevertheless, it can be done.
In answering key Dramatica questions, an analysis of James Thurber's satire,
The Catbird Seat, provides an example.
1. What is the title
of the story?
The Catbird Seat
2. In a short paragraph,
describe what The Catbird Seat is about.
This short story
explored the horrors of "downsizing" long before the term
became a fashionable catchword for the elimination of jobs and subsequent
mass firings of loyal employees who often don't see it coming. If you're
a man (or woman) with an eye on the ball and few tricks up your buttoned
down shirt sleeve, however, you may just end up sitting pretty in the
catbird seat.
3. Who is the author?
James Thurber
4. Where does the
story take place?
New York, early
1940's
5. Determine and
describe the main character-the figure with whom the reader will
most identify.
Mr. Erwin Martin:
"Cautious, painstaking" (239)
6. Determine and
describe the obstacle character-the figure that will have the most
impact on the main character.
Mrs. Ulgine Barrows:
"Her quacking voice and braying laugh . . . . had appalled Mr.
Martin instantly, but he hadn't shown it. He had given her his dry hand,
a look of studious concentration and a faint smile. 'Well,' she said,
looking at the papers on his desk, 'are you lifting the oxcart out of
the ditch?' Later: "The faults of the woman as a woman kept chattering
on in his mind like an unruly witness. She had, for almost two years
now, baited him. In the halls, in the elevator, even in his own office,
into which she romped now and then like a circus horse, she was constantly
shouting these silly questions at him. 'Are you lifting the oxcart out
of the ditch? Are you tearing up the pea patch? Are you hollering down
the rain barrel? Are you scraping around the bottom of the pickle barrel?
Are you sitting in the catbird seat?' . . . Mr. Martin dismissed all
this with an effort. It had been annoying, it had driven him near to
distraction, but he was too solid a man to be moved to murder by anything
so childish." (239-40)
7. Determine and
describe the objective characters-all the characters concerned
with the overall story.
Mr. Erwin Martin-particular
and remarkably efficient in his work; model employee
Mrs. Ulgine Barrows-loud,
vulgar, crass; she has quite a lot of power
Mr. Fitweiler-the
susceptible boss that is taken in by Barrows
Old Roberts-personnel
chief
Joey Hart-assistant
to Mr. Martin
Miss Paird-assistant
to Mr. Martin; she is not above eavesdropping for Mr. Martin's benefit
Miss Tyson-ex-employee
Mr. Brundage-ex-employee
Mr. Bartlett-ex-employee
Mr. Munson-ex-employee
Dr. Fitch-Mr. Fitweiler's
psychiatrist
Stockton-employee
Fishbein-employee
Mrs. Powell-employee
8. At the end of
the story, has the main character changed or remained the same
(mc resolve)?
Mr. Martin is steadfast
in his drive to maintain his filing department and his position as its
head.
9. Does the main
character need to grow out of something (stop) or grow
into something (start)?
Mr. Martin must
stop the madness that is Mrs. Ulgine Barrows.
10. What is main
character's approach to solving problems? Does he at first confront
a dilemma head-on (do-er), or does he adapt himself to the situation
at hand (be-er)?
Although quiet and
unassuming, Mr. Martin is nevertheless a do-er. Once Mr. Martin believes
his department is Mrs. Ulgine Barrow's next target he knows: "He
must act quickly. . . . Mr. Martin stood up in his living room, still
holding his milk glass. 'Gentlemen of the jury,' he said to himself,
'I demand the death penalty for this horrible person'" (241).
11. Determine and
describe the main character's use of linear (male mental sex) or
holistic (female mental sex) problem solving techniques.
Mr. Martin uses
linear thinking to solve his problems. Not only is his daily life extremely
routine, his plan to "rub out" Mrs. Ulgine Barrows is done
step by step.
12. Determine and
describe the actions or decisions that drive the
plot forward.
Actions drive the
plot forward, first described in the backstory:
. . . Mrs. Barrows
had met Mr. Fitweiler at a party, where she had rescued him from the
embraces of a powerfully built drunken man who had mistaken the president
of F & S for a famous retired Middle Western football coach. She
had led him to a sofa and somehow worked upon him a monstrous magic
(oc domain-psychology). The aging gentleman had jumped to the
conclusion (os focus-deduction) there and then that this was
a woman of singular attainments . . . . A week later he had introduced
her into F & S as his special advisor (os direction-induction).
(240)
Later, Mrs. Barrows'
actions are the cause of Mr. Martin's decision "to rub out Mrs.
Ulgine Barrows. The term 'rub out' pleased him because it suggested
nothing more that the correction of an error-in this case an error of
Mr. Fitweiler" (239).
13. Determine and
describe how the story has reached its conclusion (story limit).
Is it because time has run out (timelock), or because all the options
(optionlock) are exhausted?
Mr. Fitweiler has
the option to either believe Mrs. Ulgine Barrows or Mr. Martin's
account of what had transpired between the two in determining which
one will remain employed at F & S:
"Mrs. Barrows
is under the delusion (oc domain-psychology)," continued
Mr. Fitweiler, "that you visited her last evening and behaved yourself
in an-uh-unseemly manner." He raised his hand to silence Mr. Martin's
little pained outcry. "It is the nature of these psychological
diseases," Mr. Fitweiler said, "to fix upon the least likely
and most innocent party as the uh-source of persecution. These
matters are not for the lay mind to grasp, Martin. I've just had my
psychiatrist, Dr. Fitch, on the phone. He would not, of course, commit
himself, but he made enough generalizations to substantiate my suspicions.
I suggested to Mrs. Barrows, when she completed her-uh-story to me this
morning, that she visit Dr. Fitch, for I suspected her condition at
once. She flew, I regret to say, into a rage, and demanded-uh-requested
that I call you on the carpet. You may not know, Martin, but Mrs. Barrows
had planned a reorganization of your department-subject to my approval,
of course, subject to my approval (mc problem-reduction). This
brought you, rather than anyone else, to her mind-but again that is
a phenomenon for Dr. Fitch and not for us. So, Martin, I am afraid Mrs.
Barrows' usefulness here is at an end." "I am dreadfully sorry,
sir," said Mr. Martin. (244-45)
14. Is the outcome
of the story a success or failure?
This is a success
story. Mrs. Ulgine's dismissal from F & S means the potential
(os solution) for more departmental reorganization, therefore
disruptions, is eliminated.
15. At the end of
the story does the main character feel good or bad (judgment)?
Mr. Martin, without
having to literally "rub out" Mrs. Ulgine Barrows has still
effectively removed his nemesis, thus relieving his angst:
"I regret that
this has happened," said Mr. Fitweiler. "I shall ask you to
dismiss it from your mind, Martin." "Yes, sir," said
Mr. Martin, anticipating his chief's "That will be all" by
moving to the door. "I will dismiss it." He went out and shut
the door, and his step was light and quick in the hall. When he entered
his department he had slowed down to his customary gait, and he walked
quietly across the room to the W20 file, wearing a look of studious
concentration. (245-46)
16. Describe the
four points of view (domains): objective, main character,
obstacle character, and subjective.
Objective story-Universe:
F & S is a company that thrives on its systems-and will employ whatever
methods to make certain it runs with the utmost efficiency.
Main Character-Physics:
Mr. Martin is a staunch defender of his department-even to the point
of engaging in activities to "rub out Mrs. Ugline Barrows"
(239)-the woman who threatens to dispense with it and he as its head.
Obstacle Character-Psychology:
Mrs. Ulgine Barrows is a master manipulator. She has Mr. Fitweiler firmly
under her thumb and the fate of the company in her hands.
Subjective story-Mind:
Mrs. Ulgine Barrows is determined to eliminate Mr. Martin's department;
Mr. Martin is just as determined to keep it intact.
17. What is the goal
of the story? Describe.
How the "system"
of F & S stands (present) is the story goal. Although the
company president, Mr. Fitweiler, has hired Mrs. Ulgine Barrows "to
bring out the best in him and in the firm" (240), ". . . in
Mr. Martin's mind . . . . Mrs. Ulgine Barrows stood charged with willful,
blatant, and persistent attempts to destroy the efficiency and system
of F & S" (240).
18. What thematic
conflict in the objective story is explored?
The workplace
of F & S, has been in an uproar since the ". . . day confusion
got its foot in the door" in the arrival of Mrs. Ulgine Barrows.
Her attempts at reorganization, with no prior professional experience,
are depicted negatively, whereas those who are suited for the task at
hand are shown in a positive light (work vs. attempt).
19. What is the problem
in the objective story?
Mr. Fitweiler's
total reliability on Mrs. Ulgine Barrows' judgment (certainty)
creates problems for the employees of F & S:
After Miss Tyson,
Mr. Brundage and Mr. Bartlett had been fired and Mr. Munson had taken
his hat and stalked out, mailing in his resignation later, old Roberts
had been emboldened to speak to Mr. Fitweiler. He mentioned that Mr.
Munson's department had been "a little disrupted" and hadn't
they perhaps better resume the old system there? Mr. Fitweiler had said
certainly not. He had the greatest faith in Mrs. Barrows' ideas (oc
concern-conceiving). (240)
20. Describe what
conflict (concern) occurs in the four throughlines.
Objective story-present:
A self proclaimed efficiency expert has insinuated herself into
F & S-and is wasting no time in having it run her way (oc thematic
issue-expediency). It is a situation of concern to all involved:
"She had begun chipping at the cornices of the firm's edifice and
now she was swinging at the foundation stones with a pickaxe" (240).
Main character-learning:
Mr. Martin is concerned to learn his department is next on Mrs. Barrows'
hit list; Mr. Martin is concerned that no one learns of his part in
Mrs. Barrows' "rubbing out."
Obstacle character-conceiving:
Mrs. Ulgine Barrows makes an impact with her ideas: "Mr. Fitweiler
. . . had the greatest faith in Mrs. Barrows' ideas. 'They require a
little seasoning, a little seasoning is all'" (240).
Subjective story-conscious:
Considerations are the source of conflict between Mr. Martin and Mrs.
Ulgine Barrows. Mr. Martin is sensible to the fact Mrs. Ulgine Barrows
is contemplating a reorganization of his department which is problematic
for him; Mrs. Ulgine Barrows underestimates Mr. Martin, not for a second
taking his devotion to his department-and what he might do to protect
it-into consideration.
21. Describe the
sequence of events for the four throughlines (signposts).
Objective story:
In the past (signpost 1) F & S was a staid, old firm
operating quite efficiently, until the day:
[ Mrs. Barrows']
. . . quacking voice and braying laugh had first profaned the halls
of F & S on March 7, 1941. . . . It was competent, material, and
relevant to review her advent and rise to power. Mr. Martin had got
the story from Miss Paird, who seemed always able to find things out.
. . . Mr. Martin came now, in his summing up, to the afternoon of Monday,
November 2, 1942-just one week ago. On that day, at 3 P.M., Mrs. Barrows
had bounced into his office. "Boo!" she had yelled. "Are
you scraping around the bottom of the pickle barrel?" Mr. Martin
had looked at her from under his green eyeshade, saying nothing. She
had begun to wander about the office, taking it in with her great, popping
eyes. "Do you really need all these filing cabinets?"
she had demanded suddenly. (241) Much to Mr. Martin's alarm, Mrs. Ulgine
Barrows' progress (signpost 2) in turning F & S upside
down includes the "reorganization" of his department. Mr.
Martin shares his (phony) future (signpost 3) plans with
Mrs. Barrows that includes blowing up their boss. Once she reports his
extremely out of character behavior to Mr. Fitweiler, her state of mind
is questioned and she is dismissed (signpost 4-present). Mr.
Martin is successful in stopping her from steam rolling his department
and wreaking any further havoc at F& S.
Main character:
Mr. Martin bought the pack of Camels on Monday night in the most crowded
cigar store on Broadway. It was theatre time and seven or eight were
buying cigarettes. . . . If any of the staff at F & S had seen him
buy the cigarettes, they would have been astonished, for it was generally
known that Mr. Martin did not smoke, and never had (signpost 1-obtaining).
No one saw him. It was just a week to the day since Mr. Martin had decided
to rub out Mrs. Ulgine Barrows. The term "rub out" pleased
him because is suggested nothing more than the correction of an error-in
this case an error of Mr. Fitweiler. . . . The project as he had worked
it out was casual and bold, the risks were considerable. . . . And therein
lay the cunning of his scheme. No one would ever see in it the cautious,
painstaking hand of Erwin Martin, head of the filing department at F
& S, of whom Mr. Fitweiler had once said, "Man is fallible,
but Martin isn't." (239) Mr. Martin understands (signpost
2) he must be very careful not to make any mistakes as: "If
he ran into anybody, he would simply have to place the rubbing-out of
Ulgine Barrows in the inactive file forever" (242). His plan is
put into action (signpost 3-doing) once he finds himself in her
apartment: "Mr. Martin looked quickly around the living room for
the weapon. He had counted on finding one there. There were andirons
and a poker and something in a corner that looked like an Indian club.
None of them would do. . . . When Mrs. Barrows reappeared, carrying
two highballs, Mr. Martin standing there with his gloves on, became
acutely conscious of the fantasy he had wrought. Cigarettes in his pocket,
a drink prepared for him-it was all too grossly improbable. It was more
than that; it was impossible. Somewhere in the back of his mind a vague
idea stirred, sprouted. . . . The idea began to bloom, strange and wonderful.
She put the glasses on a coffee table in front of a sofa and sat on
the sofa. "Come over here, you odd little man," she said.
"Well," she said, handing him his drink, "this is perfectly
marvellous. You with a drink and a cigarette." Mr. Martin puffed,
not too awkwardly, and took a gulp of the highball. "I drink and
smoke all the time," he said. He clinked his glass against hers.
"Here's nuts to that old windbag, Fitweiler," he said, and
gulped again. The stuff tasted awful, but he made no grimace. "Really,
Mr. Martin," she said, her voice and posture changing, "you
are insulting our employer." (243) The following day, Mr. Martin
learns (signpost 4) his department will stay intact once
Mr. Fitweiler deems Mrs. Barrows mentally incompetent, after she had
reported a fantastic account of Mr. Martin's evening visit.
Obstacle character:
Mrs. Barrows and her big ideas (signpost 1-conceiving) are upsetting
the apple cart at F & S. Her role (signpost 2-being) as special
advisor to the president has a profoundly negative effect on the company,
and particularly on Mr. Martin. She comes dangerously close to becoming
(signpost 3) a corpse at Mr. Martin's hands-but it is her self-righteousness
that finally does her in. The concept (signpost 4) that
"such a drab, ordinary little man" (245) as Mr. Martin could
cause her demise changes (oc resolve) her from the office
tyrant to a blithering idiot:
She stopped yelling
to catch her breath and a new glint came into her popping eyes. . .
. She glared at Mr. Fitweiler. "Can't you see how he has tricked
us, you old fool? Can't you see his little game?" But Mr. Fitweiler
had been surreptitiously pushing all the buttons under the top of his
desk and employees of F & S began pouring into the room. "Stockton,"
said Mr. Fitweiler, "you and Fishbein will take Mrs. Barrows to
her home. Mrs. Powell, you will go with them." Stockton, who had
played a little football in high school, blocked Mrs. Barrows as she
made for Mr. Martin. It took him and Fishbein together to force her
out of the door into the hall, crowded with stenographers and office
boys. She was still screaming imprecations at Mr. Martin, tangled and
contradictory imprecations. (245)
Subjective story:
Whereas Mrs. Ulgine Barrows doesn't give Mr. Martin a second thought
(signpost 1-conscious), Mr. Martin is very conscious of her threat
to his department. He recalls (signpost 2-memory) the description
of her "ducky first-floor apartment" (242) as he makes his
way to surprise her at home:
"'Well, for
God's sake, look who's here!' bawled Mrs. Barrows, and her braying laugh
rang out like the report of a shotgun. He rushed past her like a football
tackle, bumping her. . . . 'What's after you?' she said. 'You're as
jumpy as a goat (signpost 3-preconscious)'" (242). Instead
of bumping Mrs. Barrows off, Mr. Martin acts out of character, fully
cognizant that she will be driven to report his odd behaviour to Mr.
Fitweiler the next day. She does, and to her great fury (signpost
4-subconscious), finds Mr. Fitweiler thinks she's crazy and her
employment is terminated-much to the satisfaction of Mr. Martin.
Sources Cited:
Merriam-Webster's
Encyclopedia of Literature. Springfield, Mass: Merriam Webster, 1995.
Thurber, James.
"The Catbird Seat." Studies in the Short Story. Ed. Adrian
H. Jaffe and Virgil Scott. 3rd ed. New York: Holt, 1968. 239-246.
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