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Storytelling
Output Report
for
"Rain
Man"
ANALYSIS
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Author:
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Ronald Bass and Barry Morrow |
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Analysis sources:
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- Film. United Artists Pictures, Inc., 1988. (MGM/UA
Home Video, 1988)
- Second draft screenplay, Ronald Bass, 3/7/88.
- Fleischer, Leonore. Rain Man. Signet. New York,
NY. 1989.
- Videohound's Golden Retriever 1995. Visible Ink
Press. Detroit, MI.
- Cinemania CD-ROM. Microsoft. 1995
- The Motion Picture Guide, 1989 Annual (The Films
of 1988). CineBooks, Inc. Evanston, Illinois. 1989.
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Genre:
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Drama/Road Picture |
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Setting:
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Cincinnati, Los Angeles, Las Vegas. |
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Period:
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1988 |
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Analysis by:
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Carol Compton |
Comments:
Rain Man received
eight Academy Awards including Best Picture and Best Original Screenplay.
Brief Synopsis:
"When his father
dies, ambitious and self-centered Charlie Babbitt finds he has an older
autistic brother who's been institutionalized for years. Needing him to
claim an inheritance, he liberates him from the institution and takes
to the road, where both brothers undergo subtle changes..." (Videohound,
p. 783)
Objective Character
Mini-Synopsis:
CHARLIE,
a hardened young hustler, is responsive only to his own needs. His game
plan changes when he's forced to include his road buddy and new-found
brother--
RAYMOND,
an autistic savant with limited emotional range and unlimited mathematical
abilities, steals through Charlie's defenses as he fanatically guards
his daily routine. He unintentionally attracts the benevolence of--
SUSANNA,
Charlie's girlfriend, who's frustrated by his unwillingness to relate
to her outside of the bedroom. She's also Charlie's employee and co-worker
to--
LENNY, a
young wannabe player, who thinks he has control of the car deal in Charlie's
absence, but finds he's in way over his head. If only he had the constitution
of--
DR. BRUNER,
Raymond's psychiatrist at Walbrook, who is in control of the inheritance
and is determined to honor Charlie's father's wish that only Raymond
benefits from it. He entrusts Raymond's daily care to--
VERN, Raymond's
personal attendant, who is patient and understanding. Unlike--
WYATT, a
by-the-contract banker, who demands payment on Charlie's loan and seizes
the cars, causing Charlie to do two things he hates, lose money and
lose. Period.
THE
OBJECTIVE CHARACTERS:
- Name: Charlie
Babbitt
- Gender:
Male
- Description:
- "CHARLIE
BABBITT. Mid-twenties, with dark good looks and a restless intelligence
behind the eyes. His clothes show a trace of flash, but they are
expensive. Then again, they would be if it took his last dollar..."
(Ronald Bass, p. 1)
- Role: Younger
hustler brother
- Characteristics:
- Motivation:
Logic; Pursuit; Control; Temptation;
- Methodology:
Potentiality; Proaction; Reevaluation; Nonacceptance;
- Evaluation:
Unproven; Test;
- Purpose:
Desire; Chaos; Change;
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- Name: Raymond
Babbitt
- Gender:
Male
- Description:
- "Early
forties, with vague anxious features. He stands near the car, jotting
notes quickly in a small notebook." (Ronald Bass, p. 27)
- Role: Charlie's
older autistic savant brother
- Characteristics:
- Motivation:
Uncontrolled; Avoidance;
- Methodology:
Certainty; Reaction; Evaluation;
- Purpose:
Knowledge; Self Aware; Order; Inertia;
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- Name: Dr.
Bruner
- Gender: Male
- Description:
- "Late
fifties. A big man, with powerful shoulders and hands. His square
features are calm and pleasant, but the eyes behind the smile are
always probing. Reading. It would be a mistake to underestimate
this man." (Ronald Bass, p. 25)
- Role: Raymond's
Doctor
- Characteristics:
- Motivation:
Conscience; Hinder;
- Evaluation:
Proven;
- Purpose:
Ability; Thought;
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- Name: Lenny
- Gender:
Male
- Description:
- "...[LENNY],
seated at the next desk, taking a call of his own. [Lenny] is a
scrawny nineteen with darting eyes. Just now, he looks plenty scared..."
(Ronald Bass, p. 2)
- Role: Charlie's
employee
- Characteristics:
- Methodology:
Acceptance;
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- Name: Mr.
Mooney
- Gender:
Male
- Description:
- He's a big
man who has carried great responsibility for many years as a loyal
family attorney. He never allows sentiment to interfere with his
by-the-book approach of serving his clients. "The lawyer has
a stack of papers spread before him." (Ronald Bass, p. 2)
- Role: Lawyer
- Characteristics:
- Motivation:
Oppose;
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- Name: Susanna
- Gender:
Female
- Description:
- "A woman
enters. Dressed attractively for the road, carrying her overnighter.
She is quite beautiful. This is [SUSANNA], Charlie's girlfriend.
A sweetness about her, a refinement that seems out of place here."
(Ronald Bass, p. 2)
- Role: Charlie's
Girlfriend
- Characteristics:
- Motivation:
Feeling; Support; Help;
- Evaluation:
Trust;
- Purpose:
Aware;
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AUDIENCE
AND STORY DYNAMICS APPRECIATIONS:
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Nature as it
relates to Apparent Dilemma:
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- Charlie believes
that getting half of the inheritance left by his father will solve
his business problems, and only then will he be happy. However,
his experience with Raymond shows him that what he truly needs is
a more generous attitude toward others in his life.
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Essence as
it relates to Negative Feel:
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- Charlie Babbitt's
shark-like business acumen, smooth-talking personality, and unbending
will to succeed can't get him half of the $3 million dollar inheritance.
He's thwarted at every turn by uncomprehending Raymond, fed-up Susanna,
stoic Dr. Bruner, unsympathetic bankers, and cranky customers.
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Tendency as
it relates to Willing:
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- Charlie is
willing to do whatever is necessary to get Raymond to Los Angeles
to establish guardianship. When Raymond demands his menu of the
day, Charlie produces everything from pancakes to pizza. When Raymond
must watch "People's Court" while traveling through America's
Heartland, Charlie finds the only house for miles and uses his charms
to con a woman into letting Raymond watch her television. When Charlie's
business deal is falling apart, he works with bankers, customers,
and government officials to keep it together.
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Reach as it
relates to Both:
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- Charlie has
been deeply wounded by his father; his vulnerability will appeal
to women. Charlie's drive, quick wits, and survival skills give
men someone they can identify with. Both men and women can empathize
with someone who realizes his shortcomings and does the right thing
by his brother.
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Resolve as
it relates to Change:
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- Charlie is
most concerned with making fast money and guarding his emotions.
He works hard to close the car deal and make a profit with just
"a few phone calls." He argues with Susanna when she wants
him to share his thoughts, however, because he does change he is
able to reconcile with her. After the road trip with Raymond, Charlie
turns down Dr. Bruner's offer of $250,000 to release his brother:
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CHARLIE
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It's
funny, I just realized I'm not pissed off any
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more
that my father cut me out of his will. [...]
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It's
not about the money anymore. [...] Why didn't
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anyone
ever tell me I had a brother. Because
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it
would have been nice to know him for more
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than
just the past six days.
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- Later at the
hearing with the doctors, Charlie says he connected with Raymond
during the trip and values him as family:
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CHARLIE
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I
had a father I hardly knew. A mother I didn't
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know
at all. I found out a few days ago that
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I
have a brother and I want to be with him.
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Approach as
it relates to Do-er:
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- When bureaucratic
red tape threatens his car deal, Charlie appeases his customers
and knocks $5,000 off the price of the cars. When his father's lawyer
refuses to reveal the identity of the beneficiary of the will, Charlie
goes to the bank and finds out who it is. He goes to Walbrook, discovers
he has a brother, then kidnaps Raymond, and finally demands half
of the inheritance.
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Direction as
it relates to Stop:
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- Charlie must
stop his materialistic, selfish, non-committal attitude toward life.
He cares only about the money he didn't get from his father and
considers Raymond only as a way to get it:
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CHARLIE
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I
got him and they want him. I'm going to
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keep
him until I get my half. I deserve that.
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Mental Sex
as it relates to Male:
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- Charlie, using
linear thinking, attacks his problems straight on. He puts one business
fire out at a time; when the EPA officials bug him, he considers
paying them off; when his buyers want to back out of the deal, he
gives them a discount; when his loan is due, he gets an extension;
when his inheritance is given away, he finds out who got it and
tries to make a deal. When Dr. Bruner doesn't give Charlie his half
of the inheritance, he keeps Raymond, something they want, until
he gets what he wants.
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Outcome as
it relates to Failure:
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- Charlie does
not get half of the inheritance that he expected. He doesn't even
get custody of Raymond.
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Judgment as
it relates to Good:
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- Charlie learns
to love the brother he didn't know he had. He forgives his father
for disowning him, and becomes a compassionate person.
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Work as it
relates to Action:
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- When the EPA
fails the Lamberghinis, Charlie decides to lie to his customers
and give them a discount on the cars. When Mr. Mooney, the lawyer,
reads the will giving Sanford Babbitt's fortune to someone else,
Charlie decides to find the beneficiary. When Dr. Bruner does not
give Charlie his share of the inheritance, Charlie decides to "ransom"
Raymond. After Charlie refuses to return Raymond to Walbrook, Susanna
decides to leave Charlie. After Raymond throws a tantrum when expected
to fly in an airplane, Charlie decides to drive to Los Angeles.
After the bank seizes Charlie's cars, he decides to use Raymond
to win money in Las Vegas.
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- Limit as it
relates to Optionlock:
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- Charlie pressures
the EPA to get his cars passed, gives his customers a discount,
and gets an extension on his bank loan, but still loses his cars
and goes bankrupt. Susanna pleads with Charlie to be compassionate
toward his brother, then having exhausted all her arguments, the
only thing left for her to do is to leave Charlie. Charlie does
everything he can to make Raymond comfortable during their road
trip, and then in his home, but his best efforts aren't enough to
satisfy Raymond's needs. Having failed to convince Charlie to return
Raymond, Dr. Bruner offers Charlie a payoff. Finally, Charlie's
forced to realize the best place for Raymond is at Walbrook.
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THE
OBJECTIVE STORY THROUGHLINE:
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Throughline Synopsis:
- When Charlie Babbitt,
a smooth-talking Los Angeles car salesman, returns to Cincinnati for
his father's funeral, he finds that he has inherited rose bushes and
a '49 Buick Roadmaster convertible. He is shocked to learn that his
father's $3 million fortune has been left to Raymond, Charlie's autistic
older brother of whose existence he has been completely ignorant. Having
failed to strike a deal with Dr. Bruner, the trustee of the fund and
Raymond's doctor, Charlie kidnaps Raymond from the institution and sets
off for Los Angeles determined to keep Raymond until he gets half of
the inheritance. Susanna, Charlie's girlfriend, upset at his plan to
use Raymond walks out on him. In the meantime, Dr. Bruner tries to convince
Charlie to return Raymond. During a long road trip to the West Coast,
Charlie bonds with his lovable, yet introspective, brother and having
a change of heart gives up his fight for the inheritance.
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Backstory:
- Charlie Babbitt's
car deal is in jeopardy because the EPA will not pass the four Lamberghinis
he has imported to sell. All of his money is tied-up in the cars. His
banker demands payment on his loan NOW, or the cars will be seized.
His impatient Los Angeles customers want to buy their cars elsewhere.
Charlie needs money fast and believes that there's no magical windfall
coming his way, until he's informed of his father's death. But when
Charlie was sixteen, he and his father had a falling-out over a vintage
Buick. They never spoke to each other after the incident. Embittered,
Charlie's father willed his fortune to an unknown beneficiary, leaving
Charlie only the car and some rose bushes. Little does Charlie know
that his boyhood imaginary friend, the Rain Man, was an autistic older
brother no one told him about. Raymond was institutionalized over twenty
years ago because he accidentally burned two-year old Charlie.
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Domain as it
relates to Physics:
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- Charlie strives
to sell his cars; get his father's money; travel to Los Angeles
with Raymond; save his business. Raymond rearranges his environment
in an exact way to suit him; catalogs Charlie's infractions against
him in a notebook; devours television shows; counts, remembers and
analyzes almost everything he sees. Mr. Mooney administers Sanford
Babbitt's will. Dr. Bruner works to get Raymond back. Susanna works
to convince Charlie to value Raymond as family, and to make Raymond
comfortable away from Walbrook. Lenny works to salvage the car deal.
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Concern as
it relates to Obtaining:
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- Charlie is
after the quick buck with the car deal and the inheritance, and
is determined to find a way to get Raymond to Los Angeles to claim
the inheritance. Susanna wants Charlie's emotional commitment. Raymond
wants his controlled, ordered life at Walbrook. Lenny wants Charlie's
undivided attention concerning the business. Dr. Bruner wants to
get Raymond back to Walbrook.
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Range as it
relates to Self Interest:
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- Charlie is
interested in making or getting money; Susanna is upset at Charlie's
callous attitude, needing a more fulfilling relationship; Raymond
is concerned with his immediate physical needs; Lenny wants to save
his job.
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Counterpoint
as it relates to Morality:
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- Dr. Bruner
is interested in his patient's welfare and honoring his commitment
to Raymond's father. Susanna constantly works to make Charlie aware
of his responsibility to Raymond. When Charlie is rude to Raymond
for walking in on their lovemaking, Susanna is disgusted with Charlie:
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SUSANNA
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You
go back in there. And you apologize.
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CHARLIE
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What
was I supposed to do? Tuck him in like
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a
baby? I'm not his mother, for Chrissake.
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SUSANNA
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No.
You're his brother. [...] You could show
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him
some respect.
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(Bass,
p. 51)
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Thematic Conflict
as it relates to Self Interest vs. Morality:
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- Whereas self
interest is explored by the objective characters, morality is well
represented. Dr. Bruner never wavers in his efforts to do what is
best for Raymond, selflessly denouncing personal and professional
claim to the inheritance:
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DR.
BRUNER
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I'm
trustee of the fund. But this hospital receives
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nothing
from it.
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CHARLIE
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Hardly
seems fair. Maybe that's something we
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could
discuss.
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DR.
BRUNE
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I
took on this burden out of loyalty to your
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father
and that's where that loyalty ends.
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Problem as
it relates to Control:
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- Control creates
problems for the objective characters in various ways. Charlie struggles
to control his business deal; get control of the inheritance; manage
Raymond. Raymond must tightly control his environment and daily
routine or he becomes frantic. Dr. Bruner controls Raymond's fortune,
and fights to keep Raymond under his care. Susanna tries to direct
Charlie's attitude toward Raymond. Lenny desperately tries to maintain
control over the car deal in Charlie's absence.
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Solution as
it relates to Uncontrolled:
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- Although the
objective story outcome results in failure, out of control circumstances
leads to solving problems within the story. Susanna slips from Charlie's
control and leaves him, causing Charlie to realize he needs her.
Raymond is set loose into a uncontrolled world and charms Charlie.
The unscheduled road trip sets Charlie's life in turmoil; ruins
his business; bankrupts him; prompts Dr. Bruner to offer money,
pushing Charlie toward the noble decision to release Raymond back
into the doctor's care.
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Focus as it
relates to Pursuit:
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- Charlie goes
after the inheritance; Raymond pursues order wherever he is; Dr.
Bruner looks for a way to get Raymond back at Walbrook; Susanna
seeks a kinder, gentler Charlie; Lenny attempts to achieve a successful
closure to the car deal.
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Direction as
it relates to Avoidance:
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- The characters
in Rain Man use avoidance as a means to side-track problems: Charlie
avoids emotional involvement with everyone and postpones payment
of his loan. Raymond withdraws into his "Who on First"
routine when someone invades his personal space, or when he is put
in a new environment. Mr. Mooney hides behind attorney/client privilege
when quizzed about the beneficiary of the inheritance. Dr. Bruner
eludes naming the beneficiary by citing loyalty to Charlie's father.
Lenny bails himself out of a problem with a client by getting Charlie
to tell him what to say. Susanna avoids a sticky situation by leaving
Charlie to deal with Raymond alone.
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Stipulation
as it relates to Doing:
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- The more that
the objective characters engage in activities, the more the story
moves closer to the goal: Charlie kidnaps Raymond and puts him in
a hotel room; Susanna gets fed up with Charlie and walks out, leaving
Charlie to deal with his brother alone; Raymond gambles and wins
big at Blackjack in Las Vegas, learns to dance, and kisses Susanna
in the elevator--actions that endear him to his little brother;
Dr. Bruner offers Charlie money to drop the custody hearing; and
finally, although he understands his effort to achieve the goal
of half the inheritance will result in failure, Charlie eventually
"does the right thing" and releases Raymond back into
Dr. Bruner's care.
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Catalyst as
it relates to Approach:
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- In Rain Man,
the objective characters' methods of handling problems accelerate
the story: Charlie lies to stall his customers; charms the bank
executive to find the beneficiary; attempts to cut a deal with Dr.
Bruner. Dr. Bruner's straight forward, incorruptible way of administrating
the inheritance causes Charlie to kidnap Raymond. Raymond's delicate,
introverted manner acts as a catalyst in Susanna's relationship
with Charlie--the way Charlie treats Raymond leads to a final disagreement
between him and Susanna. Lenny's timidity and inexperienced way
of handling the car deal helps destroy it.
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Inhibitor as
it relates to Obligation:
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- A sense of
obligation creates problems and slows down the progress in the objective
story in Rain Man: Dr. Bruner's pledge to Charlie's father causes
him to administer the inheritance as it was intended, for Raymond's
needs only; Bruner's professional obligation to his patient prevails
him to fight Charlie for custody of Raymond. Susanna's emotional
obligation to herself forces her to leave Charlie at a crucial moment
in his crusade, forcing him to deal with Raymond directly. As an
employee, Lenny is compelled to inform Charlie of business disasters
causing Charlie to backtrack to Las Vegas. Raymond's obligation
to maintain his peace of mind causes him to demand a strict daily
routine and not go out when it rains; this slows the two brothers'
progress to Los Angeles.
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Goal as it
relates to Obtaining:
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- Everyone is
concerned with Charlie's trying to obtain half of the inheritance.
Charlie kidnaps Raymond to force Dr. Bruner to turn over the money;
Raymond wants to return to the institution where he feels safe;
Dr. Bruner works to get Raymond back, fearing losing custody of
Raymond; Susanna fights with Charlie over his obsession to get the
inheritance.
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Consequence
as it relates to Becoming:
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- As a consequence
of Charlie's failure to get half the inheritance and custody of
Raymond, he becomes a compassionate person who values and accepts
his brother as he is. Charlie also becomes more sensitive in his
relationship with his girlfriend, Susanna.
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Cost as it
relates to The Subconscious:
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- On the way
back to Los Angeles, Susanna's need to love a caring man makes her
give up Charlie; Raymond's need for absolute control costs him extreme
anxiety when he's forced to board a plane; Charlie's desire for
money (i.e. security) temporarily loses him his girlfriend, his
business, and almost costs him his chance to know the only family
he has left. Dr. Bruner's desire to protect his patient causes him
to be inflexible when dealing with Charlie, and it nearly costs
him Raymond; Bruner has to travel to Los Angeles to get Raymond
back; offering Charlie money costs Bruner his pride.
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Dividend as
it relates to The Future:
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- Charlie gains
a brother that he'll visit in two weeks and long afterward; Raymond
gains a new friend; Susanna will have a boyfriend who'll be more
compassionate; Dr. Bruner won't have to worry about custody suits
in the future; Lenny may have a job because Charlie recouped his
money in Las Vegas.
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Requirements
as it relates to Doing:
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- In order to
get the inheritance, Charlie goes to the bank and finds out who's
got it; he investigates Walbrook; attempts to get half from Dr.
Bruner; Dr. Bruner does all he can to stop Charlie from getting
the inheritance. He doesn't give Charlie any part of it, and refuses
to identify the beneficiary of the will. After Charlie's turned
down, he takes Raymond from Walbrook.
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Prerequisites
as it relates to Being:
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- Charlie has
to adapt to the lifestyle of being on the road; assume the role
of brother/caretaker to Raymond. Raymond has to be more tolerant
of change during the trip. Dr. Bruner, acting in the capacity of
trustee of the will, administrator of Walbrook and Raymond's doctor,
must protect the beneficiary and turn down Charlie's demands for
half the inheritance.
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Preconditions
as it relates to The Preconscious:
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- Charlie's knee-jerk
reaction upon learning he has a brother is anger:
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CHARLIE
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Why
didn't anyone tell me I had a brother?
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DR.
BRUNER
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What
would you have done about it?
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CHARLIE
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I
don't know.
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- Dr. Bruner's
immediate response to Charlie's inquiry is to clam up. Charlie's
anger and hurt drives him to simply kidnap Raymond from Walbrook
without thinking about the consequences. Susanna's reaction to Charlie's
treatment of Raymond is outrage.
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Forewarnings
as it relates to Progress:
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- As it takes
more time to get to Los Angeles, Charlie's car deal becomes closer
to collapsing. Yet over the same time period Charlie becomes more
accepting of, and loving towards Raymond so that when they finally
reaches Los Angeles Charlie no longer cares about getting the inheritance.
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THE
SUBJECTIVE STORY THROUGHLINE:
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Throughline Synopsis:
- "Charlie Babbitt:
tough ( or so he thinks), hustling and bitterly proud. When his father
dies, he imagines that he is in line to inherit a fortune. But his father
has other ideas. Raymond Babbitt: the brother Charlie never knew, eighteen
years his senior, institutionalized, trapped in the prison of his mind
and haunted by shadows from his childhood. He is the one who's left
the $3 million dollar inheritance. When Charlie kidnaps Raymond in an
attempt to get the money, little does he realize that he has launched
them both on an odyssey across America--a journey that takes them back
into the past, into loss and into an unexpected rebirth of love."
- (Fleischer, back
cover)
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Backstory:
- Charlie's one happy
childhood memory is of the Rain Man:
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CHARLIE
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When
I was a kid and I was scared, the Rain Man
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would
come and sing to me.
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SUSANNA
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What
happened to him?
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CHARLIE
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Nothing.
I grew up.
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- Charlie learns
he has an autistic older brother, Raymond, who's been in an institution
for twenty years. It was Raymond who sang to him, but when Raymond accidentally
burnt the infant Charlie with hot bath water, their father sent him
away to Walbrook.
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Domain as it
relates to Psychology:
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- Charlie believes
he can manipulate Raymond just like he does everyone else by using
lies, charm, or negotiation. Instead, it's Raymond who manipulates
Charlie. Raymond's rigid way of thinking leaves little room for
negotiation, driving Charlie crazy.
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Concern as
it relates to Becoming:
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- Charlie and
Raymond become brothers, but each have been an "only"
child for so long the transformation creates conflict between them.
Charlie doesn't know how to be a brother. He's surly when expected
to be his brother's keeper, caring for Raymond's needs. At first
Raymond only regards Charlie as an unannounced visitor at the institution;
a frightening intruder into his ordered world. Eventually they do
connect emotionally and become true brothers:
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CHARLIE
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I
like having you for my big brother.
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Range as it
relates to Commitment:
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- At first Charlie
is only committed to getting half the inheritance, and in the process
uproots Raymond from his carefully structured environment which
causes Raymond much pain and anxiety. Later, Charlie becomes just
as committed to having Raymond live with him in Los Angeles, regardless
of Raymond's inability to function in a normal setting without professional
care.
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Counterpoint
as it relates to Responsibility:
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- Responsibility
is seen in the subjective story when Charlie realizes that Raymond
truly can't judge for himself and is upset by the doctor's questions.
Then he decides it's his job to end Raymond's humiliation, stop
the painful interrogation, and let Raymond go back to Walbrook.
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Thematic Conflict
as it relates to Commitment vs. Responsibility:
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- Commitment
is explored in the subjective story, but it's responsibility that
wins out. Charlie comes to believe he's the one who should take
care of his brother, and fights to convince the psychiatrists of
this.
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CHARLIE
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You
have to understand that when we started
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out
together that he was only my brother in
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name.
And this morning we had pancakes...
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RAYMOND
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Maple
syrup on the table. And Charlie
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Babbitt
made a joke.
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CHARLIE
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See?
I made a connection.
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- After it's
obvious that Raymond hasn't truly changed, Charlie realizes his
commitment to have Raymond live with him is not the responsible
choice for Raymond's well being.
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Problem as
it relates to Control:
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- The issue of
control creates problems between Charlie and Raymond: Charlie is
determined to manage Raymond to his advantage which means getting
his brother on a plane to Los Angeles, but Raymond won't be persuaded
as his only defense against the world is absolute control over what
he will and will not do. To Charlie's dismay, Raymond can't be manipulated
by any of his usual methods: Raymond won't get on a plane; won't
ride along a busy highway where accidents can happen; won't go out
in the rain.
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Solution as
it relates to Uncontrolled:
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- Uncontrolled
creates conditions that lead to solving the subjective story problem.
Raymond's demands undo Charlie's plan to get to Los Angeles quickly.
Charlie loses control over his life, and as a result learns to love
and appreciate his brother. Raymond is dropped into an uncontrolled
environment. This forces him to relate to Charlie ever so slightly:
he allows Charlie to touch him during the dance lesson; he responds
to Charlie's joke; learns that K-Mart's suck; accepts another person
into his inner world.
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Focus as it
relates to Conscience:
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- Charlie and
Raymond focus their efforts on conscience. Raymond becomes terrified
when he's reminded that he burned the infant Charlie with hot bath
water. Charlie then realizes that Raymond's concern for his safety
instigated his older brother's twenty-year stay at the institution,
and becomes more sympathetic towards Raymond.
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Direction as
it relates to Temptation:
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- Raymond's and
Charlie's efforts toward temptation creates conflict: Charlie gives
into the urge to find the anonymous beneficiary of the inheritance,
steal Raymond, then ransom him for half the inheritance. Raymond's
unable to resist filling his mind with data at every opportunity,
betting on the "wheel of fortune" at the casino and losing
$3,000, being attracted to the hooker because of her glittery necklace
and confessing to counting cards.
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Stipulation
as it relates to Being:
-
- As the story
progresses Raymond and Charlie act like travelers on the road: They
ride together in the Buick; eat at roadside restaurants; share motel
rooms; watch television together--all very uneasily at first. Then
they move into a comfort zone where they almost act like brothers:
Charlie warns Raymond that if the batteries wear down in his Watchman,
he'll miss the "People's Court" at three o'clock; Raymond
doesn't like having suntan lotion smeared on his face, but lets
Charlie do it anyway; they wear similar new suits at the casino;
they work as a team to win money at Blackjack.
-
Catalyst as
it relates to Rationalization:
-
- Charlie uses
excuses to justify kidnapping Raymond. When asked why he took Raymond
from the institution:
-
CHARLIE
-
Because
I'm pissed at him.
-
-
SUSANNA
-
At
whom?
-
-
CHARLIE
-
At
my father.
-
-
SUSANNA
-
You're
pissed at your father and you bring
-
Raymond
here. Why?
-
-
CHARLIE
-
I
don't know why. Because I got him and
-
they
want him.
-
Inhibitor as
it relates to Attitude:
-
- Charlie's hard-ass
attitude slows down the process of getting close to Raymond: He
taunts Raymond when he handles the Shakespeare book; turns the lights
out on Raymond instead of apologizing for being rude when Raymond
walked in on his lovemaking to Susanna; screams at Raymond for insisting
they return to Cincinnati to buy underwear. Raymond's instinctive
attitude of exclusion makes it near impossible for him to bond with
his brother even slightly: Raymond won't let anyone touch him; is
inflexible about his eating and sleeping habits; virtually ignores
the people around him. When Charlie first meets Raymond, he strikes
out at him after reading an inscription in one of his books: "Happy
Birthday Raymond with Fondest Wishes, Father."
-
CHARLIE
-
You
like Shakespeare, Ray?
-
-
RAYMOND
-
I
don't know.
-
-
CHARLIE
-
You
don't know. You read "Macbeth?"
-
-
RAYMOND
-
I
don't know.
-
-
CHARLIE
-
You
read the "The Twelfth Night?"
-
-
RAYMOND
-
(distraught)
Vern!
-
-
SUSANNA
-
(to
Charlie) Stop it.
-
-
CHARLIE
-
You
read all these stories that are in this book
-
and
you don't know if you read this book.
-
(Laughs)
You don't know. Don't know. It's
-
okay,
Ray. I won't touch anything else.
-
Charlie
Babbitt's THROUGHLINE:
-
Role:
- Younger hustler
brother
-
Description:
- "CHARLIE BABBITT.
Mid-twenties, with dark good looks and a restless intelligence behind
the eyes. His clothes show a trace of flash, but they are expensive.
Then again, they would be if it took his last dollar..." (Ronald
Bass, p. 1)
-
Throughline Synopsis:
- Charlie lives fast,
thinks fast, makes fast money, and can charm anyone out of what he wants,
until his father dies leaving Charlie only a car and some rose bushes,
and bestowing a $3 million estate to someone else. Charlie tries to
make a deal with the trustee of the estate and fails. He stumbles upon
his autistic brother Raymond, the recipient of the inheritance, someone
Charlie can't charm. Charlie kidnaps Raymond from the mental institution,
and tries to get him to L.A. fast via a plane, but fails. Forced to
take the slow route to California, Charlie gradually changes his mind
about his fast track life without emotional commitment. He comes to
love Raymond and lets him return to the institution where he'll get
the best care.
-
Backstory:
- Charlie's mother
died when he was two years old. He was a "late" child and
after his mother's death, Charlie's father was unable to express affection
toward him:
-
CHARLIE
-
The
only things he cared about were those
-
rose
bushes and that car.
-
- When Charlie was
sixteen and brought home a good report card, he requested a victory
drive in his father's prized '49 Roadmaster. His father refused. Charlie
stole the keys and took his buddies for a drive anyway. His father reported
the car stolen and the boys were jailed. The other boys were bailed
out by their dads immediately, but Charlie's father left him in jail
for two days.
-
CHARLIE
-
My
father has stuck it to me all of my life.
-
- Scared, furious,
and hurt, Charlie left home after that and never spoke to his father
again. Since his late teens, Charlie has had only himself to rely upon,
and to get what he feels he deserves in life. His hard edge has been
honed by necessity and life's disappointments.
-
-
Domain as it
relates to Universe:
-
- Charlie is
in a situation, trapped on the road far from his crumbling business
in a car that has come to symbolize his father's contempt for him,
with a brother whose fastidious routine drives him crazy. He is
plunged into the role of brother and caretaker, and must direct
his efforts beyond his own needs.
-
Concern as
it relates to The Future:
-
- At the beginning
of the story Charlie's concern for the future is that his car deal
must go through:
-
CHARLIE
-
All
of my money is tied up in those cars.
-
If
I don't get my money out I'm finished.
-
- Later, after
learning about the $3 million dollar inheritance, Charlie is sure
getting the money will solve his problems:
-
CHARLIE
-
I
need that money.
-
- But by the
end of the story he wants Raymond to be part of his future, and
plans to visit Raymond at the institution in two weeks time.
-
Range as it
relates to Preconception:
-
- Charlie is
unwilling to reevaluate his feelings toward his father. He is so
embittered toward his father that when he learns of his death he
shows no emotion. He merely apologizes to Susanna because their
weekend plans are ruined. When Susanna comments on his lack of emotion,
Charlie explains:
-
CHARLIE
-
Look,
I told you before we had a falling out a
-
long
time ago. My mother died when I was two.
-
It
was just him and me. We just didn't get along.
-
- When the lawyer
reads Charlie father's last words expressing regret over their estrangement,
Charlie is unmoved. Just as he did as a teenager, he is determined
to get what he feels he deserves in spite of his father's wishes.
This time he steals Raymond instead of the car. When asked why,
he says:
-
CHARLIE
-
My
father has stuck it to me all of my life.
-
Counterpoint
as it relates to Openness:
-
- Openness is
explored by Charlie in terms of his brother. In spite of his frustration
with Raymond, Charlie tries to understand and reach his introspective
brother.
-
CHARLIE
-
You
can't tell me you're not in there somewhere.
-
- He slows the
trip down further by taking Raymond to a small town general practitioner
where Charlie finally begins to appreciate Raymond's gift rather
than be annoyed by it.
-
Thematic Conflict
as it relates to Preconception vs. Openness:
-
- At first Charlie
holds onto his prejudices against his father which spill over into
his heartless attitude toward Raymond. However, Charlie's tendency
toward openness allows him to acknowledge Raymond's genius with
numbers:
-
CHARLIE
-
He's
a genius. [...] That's amazing, Ray,
-
you
should work for NASA or something.
-
Charlie's
openness further cuts through his
-
annoyance
with Raymond leading him to:
-
Discover
that his childhood pal Rain Man
-
was
Raymond; win enough money in
-
Las
Vegas to save his business; teach
-
Raymond
to dance in their Vegas hotel suite.
-
Problem as
it relates to Control:
-
- Charlie creates
problems by trying to control all aspects of his life. Since his
estrangement with his father, Charlie has refused to let anyone
into his heart including his caring girlfriend. He controls the
car deal by lying to his customers about the EPA and giving them
a discount; he lies to his banker about sending a check over via
a mail girl; he contemplates bribing the EPA officials to clear
his Lamberghinis.
-
CHARLIE
-
Look,
have you tried cash? How much
-
can
an EPA guy earn in a week...
-
(Bass,
p. 3)
-
- He attempts
to manipulate Raymond and Susanna by telling them Dr. Bruner wants
him and Raymond to spend time together.
-
Solution as
it relates to Uncontrolled:
-
- Once Charlie
can release his anger toward his father, and animosity toward his
brother, he can begin to be a compassionate human being. A concrete
example of his letting go is when he gives up his fight for half
of the inheritance, and once again, when he gives up the custody
battle for his brother. This effort allows him to begin a manageable
and rewarding relationship with Raymond.
-
Focus as it
relates to Help:
-
- Charlie focuses
on the help he's not getting from the objective characters. Mr.
Mooney doesn't tell him the name of the beneficiary; Dr. Bruner
won't give him half of the inheritance; Susanna won't stay and assist
him with Raymond. Charlie uses the method of helping others to get
what he wants. He slashes money off the cost of the cars when his
customers become tired of waiting; when Dr. Bruner says that neither
he nor the hospital benefits from the inheritance, Charlie offers
to help Bruner get some of the funds.
-
Direction as
it relates to Hinder:
- Charlie approach
to solving problems is to undermine others' efforts. For example,
he undermines Dr. Bruner's control of Raymond by removing his brother
from Walbrook, and later, does everything to block the doctor's
efforts to bring Raymond back to the institution.
-
DR.
BRUNER
-
I'm
just a doctor making a recommendation
-
to
the court.
-
CHARLIE
-
You
guys have already made up your minds.
-
I'll
see you in court. My bother came further
-
with
me in a week than he did with you in
-
20
years. That's the truth. . . . I had a father I
-
hardly
knew. A mother I didn't know at all.
-
I
found out a few days ago that I have a brother,
-
and
I want to be with him. And I'm suppose
-
to
give him up? [...] I didn't hurt him. He's not
-
hurting
me. We're not hurting you. Why are
-
you
interfering? This is my family. This
-
is
my family do you understand that?
-
Stipulation
as it relates to Progress:
-
- The more time
it takes to get to L.A., the more Charlie comes to understand and
grow closer to his brother, and begins to fulfill his brother's
needs willingly: he buys a portable television so Raymond won't
miss People's Court; has Raymond's bed moved by the window in their
Las Vegas suite; stocks up on cheese puffs at his home. By doing
these things for his brother, Charlie is growing into a better person.
-
Unique Ability
as it relates to Openness:
-
- Charlie's willingness
toward openness forces him to re-evaluate his relationship with
his father, value Raymond as family, give up his selfish desire
for half the inheritance, and put Raymond's welfare first.
-
Critical Flaw
as it relates to Denial:
-
- Charlie denies
his feelings of hurt and disappointment, covering them up with an
aloof attitude. It costs him a relationship with his father-- he
ran away from home returning only after his father's death; nearly
costs him his girlfriend--disgusted with his stubbornness she leaves
him; almost keeps him from knowing his brother--Charlie's callousness
blinds him to Raymond's endearing qualities and special abilities.
-
-
Raymond
Babbitt's THROUGHLINE:
-
Role:
- Charlie's older
autistic savant brother
-
Description:
- "Early forties,
with vague anxious features. He stands near the car, jotting notes quickly
in a small notebook." (Ronald Bass, p. 27)
-
Throughline Synopsis:
- Raymond Babbitt
follows his brother off of the grounds of Walbrook expecting a short
trip, but gets a week-long excursion instead. As he is lead through
America, he learns to accept another person into his life.
-
Backstory:
- Raymond Babbitt,
an autistic savant about forty, has been institutionalized at Walbrook
for twenty years because he accidentally burned the infant Charlie with
bath water. Dr. Bruner explains Raymond's condition:
-
DR.
BRUNER
-
Raymond
has a problem communicating
-
and
learning. He can't even express himself
-
or
probably even understand his own emotions
-
in
a traditional way. There are dangers
-
everywhere
for Raymond. Routines, rituals are
-
all
he has to protect himself. [...] Well, it's the
-
way
he acts, sleeps, eats, uses the bathroom,
-
walks,
talks, everything. Any break from
-
that
routine is terrifying. [...] He doesn't
-
understand
the concept of money.
-
-
Domain as it
relates to Mind:
- The fixed mind
set of Sanford Babbitt is shown through Raymond. Leaving his entire
fortune to Raymond and nothing for his younger son defines how Sanford
reacted to Charlie's abandonment. Although Raymond doesn't share
the same belief, he still uses the same fixed attitude techniques:
he won't go on an airplane; he must buy underwear at a particular
Cincinnati K-Mart; no one can touch him; he will only eat the "menu
item of the day" for dinner.
- Concern as it
relates to The Subconscious:
- Raymond must
satisfy his most basic needs in a specific way: on Mondays he must
have pizza for dinner; the maple syrup must be on the table before
the pancakes arrive; he must sleep by the window each night; no
one can touch him. These demands are taken for granted at Walbrook,
but when they are placed on Charlie they create conflict.
- Range as it
relates to Denial:
- Raymond's autism
has denied him the capacity to relate to anyone in a normal way.
He also has been denied any chance of a normal home life, or a relationship
with his brother, because Sanford Babbitt believed Raymond was a
threat to young Charlie.
- Counterpoint
as it relates to Closure:
- Raymond's traumatic
reaction to remembering the bath accident when Charlie was two years
old, causes Charlie to assure him that he didn't hurt the baby.
-
RAYMOND
-
Hot
water hurt baby!
-
-
CHARLIE
-
Hurt
me? Hurt me?
-
-
RAYMOND
-
Yeah.
-
-
CHARLIE
-
I'm
not burned. I'm not burned. It's okay.
-
It's
okay.
-
- Raymond calms
down and pats Charlie's head, now knowing he didn't hurt Charlie,
and bringing the episode to a resolution.
- Thematic Conflict
as it relates to Denial vs. Closure:
- For years Raymond
was denied normal contact with his family and a chance at interaction
with the world at large, however slight. When Raymond is exposed
to his brother closure is possible: Raymond is finally assured that
he didn't hurt his brother twenty years ago; he learns how to dance;
he kisses a woman in the elevator.
- Problem as it
relates to Consider:
- Raymond's use
of consider poses problems for Charlie. Raymond doesn't consider
anyone else, contemplating the world only in reference to himself:
No matter that Charlie needs to get to L.A. quickly, Raymond weighs
the possibility of a plane crashing and will not get on one; Raymond
doesn't even consider going out when it rains, further frustrating
Charlie; he intensely ponders the way clothes fall in a clothes
dryer, rather than watch the expensive portable television Charlie
bought for him.
- Solution as
it relates to Reconsider:
- If Raymond
would reconsider his conclusion that any flight that's not a Qantas
flight will crash, that he can't go out when it rains, that the
only place to get underwear is at a certain K-Mart in Cincinnati,
then the trip would go much faster and he wouldn't have to experience
the anxiety of strange motel rooms, not to mention he would be settled
into one place more quickly.
- Focus as it
relates to Pursuit:
- Raymond's focus
on pursuit causes problems for Charlie: He goes after the moaning
sounds coming from Charlie and Susanna's bedroom; he wants to go
back to Cincinnati to buy underwear; he pursues a win on the "wheel
of fortune" in the casino and loses $3,000; he pursues the
hooker in the bar and tells her he's been counting cards, something
taboo in a casino.
- Direction as
it relates to Avoidance:
- Raymond's use
of avoidance to side-step his problems impacts Charlie: He won't
board an airplane and has a fit when forced to, causing Charlie
embarrassment at the airport and a delay in their journey; he retreats
into reciting "Who's on First" whenever he's put into
an unfamiliar room; later in the trip his avoidance of touching
another person frustrates Charlie when he wants to hold Raymond.
- Stipulation
as it relates to The Preconscious:
- As Raymond
gets further away from Walbrook, some of his gut reactions occur
less frequently. He will let Charlie touch him sometimes; he allows
Charlie to take care of his daily needs; he shares meals and motel
rooms with his younger brother.
- Unique Ability
as it relates to Closure:
-
- Raymond ends
Charlie's animosity toward him by revealing that he is the Rain
Man, Charlie's imaginary friend who sang to him when he was a scared
two-year-old.
-
CHARLIE
-
You.
You're the Rain Man? [...] You were the
-
one
who sang to me?
-
-
RAYMOND
-
Yeah.
-
-
CHARLIE
-
What
was that song. What did you sing?
-
- Raymond begins
to sing "I Saw Her Standing There" and Charlie joins in.
This incident compels Charlie to changes his attitude toward Raymond.
- Critical Flaw
as it relates to Preconception:
-
- Raymond's narrow
viewpoint of life causes him more anxiety when Charlie becomes frustrated
and leaves him alone in the car. Unattended, Raymond wanders through
a small town where his habit to fixate on things makes him stop
in the middle of a busy street when a sign flashes "DON'T WALK,"
and he nearly gets him injured.
-
-
ACT
PROGRESSIONS:
The Objective Throughline
Act Order:
-
Objective Story
Signpost #1 as it relates to Understanding:
-
- Susanna understands
Charlie a little better after he tells her the story about his joyride
in the '49 Buick as a teenager, and how it caused the trouble between
him and his father; Charlie understands that he's been cut from
this father's will.
-
-
Objective Story
Journey #1 from Understanding to Learning:
-
- Charlie's bitter
disappointment over the will is compounded with crippling hurt when
he learns that the beneficiary is a "secret" brother.
Susanna's tender moment of understanding is shattered when she learns
the lengths Charlie will go to in order to get half the inheritance.
Dr. Bruner's cool, professional appreciation of Charlie's feelings
turns to frustration after he learns of Raymond's new situation
as a hostage.
-
-
Objective Story
Signpost #2 as it relates to Learning:
-
- Charlie learns
from the bank executive where the beneficiary lives; learns that
Dr. Bruner is loyal to his father and won't tell him who got the
inheritance; accidentally learns that he has an autistic older brother.
Dr. Bruner learns how determined Charlie is to get his share of
the inheritance. Raymond learns that his father is dead and his
brother has grown up. Susanna learns that Charlie will do anything,
no matter how amoral, to get what he wants.
-
-
Objective Story
Journey #2 from Learning to Doing:
-
- Dr. Bruner
passionately pleas for the safe return of Raymond to Walbrook. Susanna
heatedly condemns Charlie's motives for keeping Raymond and angrily
leaves him. Charlie bitterly learns Raymond's emotional limitations
and begrudgingly attends to the daily tasks of feeding, bedding,
and coping with his brother on the road.
-
-
Objective Story
Signpost #3 as it relates to Doing:
-
- Lenny informs
Charlie that the cars have been seized. Raymond analyzes the fall
of the clothes in the laundry mat dryer; memorizes the juke box
numbers in the diner; counts cards for Charlie in the middle of
the dessert. Charlie pawns his watch; dresses him and Raymond up
in suits; plays Blackjack; teaches Raymond to dance. Dr. Bruner
travels to Los Angeles and offers Charlie $250,000 to give Raymond
back.
-
-
Objective Story
Journey #3 from Doing to Obtaining:
-
- Pressured by
the collapse of his business, Charlie tutors Raymond in Blackjack
to win in Las Vegas, and in the process strikes emotional gold when
he realizes Raymond's true value as a brother. Dr. Bruner's concern
for Raymond's welfare prompts him make a calculated bid for Raymond's
return to Walbrook.
-
-
Objective Story
Signpost #4 as it relates to Obtaining:
-
- Charlie does
not get half the inheritance for himself, but instead achieves a
lasting bond with Raymond. Raymond returns to Walbrook with a new
portable television, and a new "announced visitor" in
two weeks. Dr. Bruner gets his patient back, and retains unchallenged
authority over the inheritance.
-
The
Subjective Throughline Act Order:
Subjective Story
Signpost #1 as it relates to Conceiving:
-
- After Charlie
and Raymond first meet, Charlie comes up with the idea of taking Raymond
to Los Angeles until he can figure out a way to gain control of the
inheritance.
-
- Subjective Story
Journey #1 from Conceiving to Conceptualizing:
-
- Inspired by
anger and jealousy, Charlie thinks of kidnapping Raymond and ransoming
him for half the inheritance. This sets off an emotional roller
coaster that neither Charlie nor Raymond could ever have imagined
as part of their journey across America.
- Subjective Story
Signpost #2 as it relates to Conceptualizing:
-
- Charlie imagines
a quick, unemotional plane ride to Los Angeles followed by a fast
custody hearing arranged by his lawyer. But Raymond's concept of
the trip involves a slow, no-risk road excursion with the special-of-the-day
dining and game show entertainment. Much to Charlie's chagrin, it
is Raymond's plan that is implemented.
- Subjective Story
Journey #2 from Conceptualizing to Being:
-
- Raymond's and
Charlie's different images of cross-country travel create tension
between them. Charlie stops the car in the middle of a deserted
road, jumps out and screams at Raymond in pure frustration:
-
CHARLIE
-
Underwear
is UNDERWEAR. What
-
difference
does it make where you buy it. It's
-
underwear
wherever you buy it, in Cincinnati
-
or
wherever! [...] You can't tell me you're not
-
in
there somewhere.
-
- They uneasily
settle into a way of coexisting on the road, moving into the roles
of babysitter and oversized adolescent.
- Subjective Story
Signpost #3 as it relates to Being:
-
- Charlie and
Raymond act like a slick team of high rollers in Las Vegas; they
pretend to be dance partners in their hotel suite.
- Subjective Story
Journey #3 from Being to Becoming:
-
- Raymond and
Charlie grow from acting like buddies simply to get along during
their travels, to obtaining a newfound family relationship. They
share a quiet moment together after the psychological hearing, their
heads tilted closely together. Raymond allows Charlie to kiss him,
sealing a brotherly partnership.
- Subjective Story
Signpost #4 as it relates to Becoming:
-
- Charlie's transformation
from a hardened loner into a loving brother is illustrated when
he kisses Raymond and says:
-
CHARLIE
-
I
like having you for a big brother.
-
- Raymond's transformation
is illustrated by his relaxed demeanor with Charlie at the train
station, changing from a K-Mart guy to a dapper GQ man:
-
RAYMOND
-
K-Mart
sucks.
-
The
Main Character Throughline Act Order:
-
Main Character
Signpost #1 as it relates to The Future:
-
- Charlie believes
that getting half of the $3 million inheritance will save his business
and ensure his future.
-
- Main Character
Journey #1 from The Future to The Present:
-
- Frustrated
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