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Storytelling Output Report

 for

"Quills"


 ANALYSIS INFORMATION: 


  •  General Storytelling:
 Complete
  •  Act Order Storytelling:
 Complete
  •  Character List:
 Complete
  •  Build Characters:
Partial
 
 

  Author:

  Doug Wright

 Analysis sources: 

 

Cates, Gilbert. "To Our Audience," Performing Arts October 1996. Wright, Doug. "Playwright Doug Wright Talks About His Play Quills," Performing Arts October 1996.

Wright, Doug. Quills. New York: Dramatists Play Service, 1996.

 Genre:

  "The play is written, I hope, with all the fervor and self-consciousness of true melodrama" (Wright 5).

 Setting:

  Charenton Asylum

 Period:

  1807

 Analysis by:

  Katy E. Monahan Huntley


Comments:

Madeleine
Some things belong on paper, others in life.
It's a blessed fool who can't tell the difference.

(Wright 22)

Although he does not take it to the same extremes as the Marquis de Sade, playwright Doug Wright explores the controversial area of art and censorship in Quills. In terms of the Dramatica theory, the author makes a complete argument with four viable throughlines. The storytelling addresses the compelling issues of what constitutes pornography, how influential is pornography on one's behavior, and what, if any, responsibilities lie with the author and with the audience. In an interview Wright explains:
. . . I think art is a very safe cage in which to house "the beast within." We have an obligation to examine--unflinchingly, and without fear--our very darkest impulses. Without that kind of scrutiny, how can we ever hope to truly understand ourselves, our world

(P9).

Brief Synopsis:

As Dr. Royer-Collard takes on the position of chief physician of the Charenton Asylum, it comes to his attention that a most notorious patient resides within--the Marquis de Sade. At Royer-Collard's behest, Abbe de Coulmier is enlisted to reform the madman--specifically to stop the Marquis from writing sadomasochistic pornography.

Objective Character Mini-Synopsis:

Dr. Royer-Collard--Chief physician of the Charenton asylum. He hires Monsieur Prouix--A celebrated architect, to create a fabulous chateau to contain Madame Royer-Collard--The Doctor's wife, a woman of considerable appetites. He cannot finance this venture without misusing the funds donated by Renee Pelagie--The grief-stricken wife of a madman who desires to reestablish herself in polite society. Dr. Royer-Collard orders Abbe de Coulmier--Administrator at the asylum, to stop The Marquis--The asylum's most notorious inmate, from producing works of pornography that so entertain Madeleine Leclerc--The seamstress at Charenton; sixteen and quite lovely, but whose demise it at the hands of another Sade fan, Bouchon--A madman heard through a chink in the wall.

THE OBJECTIVE CHARACTERS:

Name: Abbe de Coulmier
Gender: Male
Description:
Kind; slightly obtuse
Role: Asylum Administrator
Characteristics:
Motivation: Pursuit; Faith; Conscience;
Evaluation: Unproven; Trust;
Purpose: Change; Order; Aware;
Name: The Marquis de Sade
Gender: Male
Description:
Brilliant, perverse, witty, anti-hypocritical
Role: Notorious Inmate
Characteristics:
Motivation: Disbelief; Avoidance; Temptation;
Methodology: Nonacceptance; Proaction;
Evaluation: Test;
Purpose: Inertia; Chaos; Self Aware;
Name: Bouchon
Gender: Male
Description:
Susceptible to stories
Role: Lunatic
Characteristics:
Motivation: Uncontrolled; Hinder;
Methodology: Reaction;
Name: Dr. Royer-Collard
Gender: Male
Description:
Pompous, astute in his career, oblivious to what happens at home
Role: Chief Physician
Characteristics:
Motivation: Oppose; Reconsider; Control; Logic;
Evaluation: Proven; Cause; Ending;
Name: Madame Royer-Collard
Gender: Female
Description:
Amoral
Role: Dr.'s wife
Characteristics:
Evaluation: Effect; Unending;
Name: Madeleine Leclerc
Gender: Female
Description:
Buxom and bouncy; street smart, yet innocent
Role: Seamstress
Characteristics:
Motivation: Support; Help;
Methodology: Acceptance;
Name: Monsieur Prouix
Gender: Male
Description:
Adept at saying what people want to hear; selective with his own listening skills
Role: Architect
Characteristics:
Purpose: Ability;
Name: Renee Pelagie
Gender: Female
Description:
Social Climber
Role: Sade's wife
Characteristics:
Motivation: Consider; Feeling;
Purpose: Desire;

AUDIENCE AND STORY DYNAMICS APPRECIATIONS:

Nature as it relates to Apparent Dilemma:

The measures Abbe de Coulmier employs to censure The Marquis are not appropriate and lead to failure.

Essence as it relates to Negative Feel:

The last thing the objective characters want to do is to understand or appreciate the meaning of The Marquis's work, therefore, they put all their efforts into avoiding this consequence. Gilbert Cates, Producing Director for a Los Angeles production of Quills, quotes Milos Foreman:
Pornographers are the first victims of totalitarian governments, and however unsavory, they must be regarded as an inevitable consequence of free society.

(Cates P2).

Tendency as it relates to Willing:

At the outset, Coulmier is willing to take on the responsibility of overseeing The Marquis. He remains willing throughout the story, although he does not necessarily care for the methods he is forced to resort to to contain the patient.

Reach as it relates to Both:

Both women and men will empathize with Abbe de Coulmier, a man with great empathy for the sick and ailing.

Resolve as it relates to Change:

Abbe de Coulmier changes from an administrator in the asylum to an inmate:
Dr. Royer-Collard
Circumstances have turned you surly. Interred
too long with the beast, you've now become
one.

(Wright 75)

Approach as it relates to Do-er:

Abbe de Coulmier takes on his responsibilities with great energy and enthusiasm. He actively looks for positive ways to solve problems, as illustrated in his conversation with Dr. Royer-Collard regarding rehabilitating The Marquis:
Coulmier
I implore you, do not insist that I negate my
principles. Let me continue in my charitable
course.

(Wright 20)

Direction as it relates to Start:

Abbe de Coulmier needs to take the upper hand in his relationship with The Marquis to be successful in restraining the inmate's prose. This does not happen.

Mental Sex as it relates to Male:

Abbe de Coulmier evaluates events as cause and effect. He sees each problem he has with The Marquis as a new issue, to be handled separate and apart from the last. This problem solving method fails, as The Marquis is able to counter his efforts with his own holistic methods.

Outcome as it relates to Failure:

No-one is able to envision a way to stop The Marquis from disseminating his stories: "In the last scene, the boxes containing the body parts of the Marquis tremble with pleasure. One hand snakes loose from its box . . . and begins to write" (Back cover--Dramatists Play Service, Inc.).

Judgment as it relates to Bad:

The Abbe de Coulmier unwittingly and unhappily ends up an inmate of the asylum.

Work as it relates to Action:

Dr. Royer-Collard is hired to restore Charenton to its former glory; Her reputation ruined, Renee Pelagie decides to beg and bribe the doctor to stop her husband from writing his stories; Each time The Marquis comes up with a new way to put his stories into circulation, the doctor and Abbe must decide on a different course of action to stop him; and so forth.

Limit as it relates to Optionlock:

Coulmier only has a finite number of ways (and The Marquis' body parts) to stop The Marquis from telling his tales.

THE OBJECTIVE STORY THROUGHLINE:

Throughline Synopsis:

Dr. Royer-Collard accepts the position of Chief Physician at the Charenton Asylum. He is there to restore the institution to its former stellar reputation. At the same time, he hopes to curtail his wife's tendency to stray by hiring a renown architect to build her a fabulous chateau. Upon his arrival, he is entreated by Renee Pelagie to stop her husband, Charenton's most notorious inmate--The Marquis de Sade, from churning out pornography. Dr. Royer-Collard accepts a bribe from The Marquise and proceeds to charge the Abbe de Coulmier with the responsibility of rehabilitating The Marquis. Each attempt to stop The Marquis is met with an ingenious foil. The Marquis and his keen audience do not take the censorship of his work lightly; riots and carnage ensue. Madness eventually overtakes Coulmier as he is successful in destroying The Marquis' body, but not his mind.

Backstory:

Charenton Asylum, home to the notorious Marquis de Sade, is in need of a leader and financial aid:
Dr. Royer-Collard: I am the newly appointed Chief Physician of the Charenton Asylum. It is my solemn duty to restore this ailing institution to its former glory. (Wright 7)

Domain as it relates to Psychology:

Quills explores the art of manipulation. Dr. Royer-Collard coerces his wife into moving away from Paris to the provinces by promising "her a chateau to rival Fontainbleau" (Wright 8); Renee Pelagie and Dr. Royer-Collard play a cat-and-mouse game to each get what they want-- she desires to return to her social position, he says he wants money for the institution that houses her infamous husband:
Dr. Royer-Collard
. . . If you were to buttress your entreaties, with,
perhaps, the means to oblige them . . . Is it not
true, that the recent sale of his (The Marquis')
mansion at La Coste has granted you a sudden
windfall?
 
Renee Pelagie
A trifling nest egg, hardly a fortune.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
If you are truly determined to step out of the long,
dark shadow of your husband's celebrity . . .
 
Renee Pelagie
Don't toy with me doctor!

(Wright 13);

The Marquis manipulates the staff to care for his creature comforts:
Coulmier
As you know, most esteemed Marquis, the staff
has done its utmost to render you comfortable
here.
 
The Marquis
It's true, dear-heart, you've spoiled me pink.

(Wright 23);

The Marquis provides Madeleine and her mother with the lurid stories they crave in return for kisses from the young girl; Cracking a riding whip, Madame Royer-Collard manipulates the architect, Monsieur Prouix, into serving her needs.

Concern as it relates to Conceptualizing:

Dr. Royer-Collard and the Abbe de Coulmier envision ways to end The Marquis' prolific pornography; The Marquis is derisive of the authorities plans to silence him:
The Marquis
. . . It was easy to devise my undoing, wasn't it?
Wasn't it? A regular parlor game. Each of you,
chirping like giddy magpies. "Solitary
confinement! Perhaps we'll dock his dessert. . .

(Wright 56);

The Marquis is adept at envisioning new ways to disseminate his stories; Madame Royer-Collard envisions a way to leave her husband, with the help of her architect:
Monsieur Prouix
I worry, Marguerite, that you don't really love me
at all, but merely mean to use me to your own
convenient ends, as a vehicle to escape your
husband's tyranny.
 
Madame Royer-Collard
You're brighter than you look.

(Wright 58)

Range as it relates to Situation:

Dr. Royer-Collard accepts a post at the Charenton Asylum, without full awareness of how things stand. Renee Pelagie hints to him what the situation is at Charenton that affects them all:
Renee Pelagie
You are new to Charenton, are you not?
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
I am.
 
Renee Pelagie
Perhaps you are not yet familiar with my husband,
and his unusual case.

(Wright 10)

Counterpoint as it relates to Circumstances:

Dr. Royer-Collard explains the circumstances that concern him in retaining his position at Charenton:
Dr. Royer-Collard
More than my marriage is at stake, Monsieur
Prouix. If my wife runs rampant here in Saint
Maurice, the Ministry will call my very
competence into question. I can hear them now.
"We've entrusted over five hundred madmen to
his care. How can he keep the lunatics at bay,
when he can't even harness his own wife?

(Wright 9)

Thematic Conflict as it relates to Situation vs. Circumstances:

Dr. Royer-Collard and Coulmier discuss the situation regarding The Marquis, and the circumstances that compel them to end the inmate's tales:
Coulmier
Already he's catalogued every known vice
--and some hitherto unknown!
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
Imagine if this wound its way among the inmates.
. . . Understand that his reformation is an urgent priority.
 
Coulmier
I'll do all that I can.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
Do More. Otherwise, I'll be forced to report to the
Ministry that the inmates are indeed running the
asylum.

(Wright 20)

Problem as it relates to Order:

Madame Royer-Collard's pattern of sexual escapades is a problem for her husband; The drastic measures Dr. Royer-Collard orders Coulmier to take with regard to The Marquis is a problem for the kindly administrator; Sade's pattern of pornographic acts and his proliferation of written pornographic works is a problem for France:
Dr. Royer-Collard
. . . I have the strictest orders, in a writ signed
by Napoleon himself, to contain the man
indefinitely.

(Wright 10);

Renee Pelagie points out the problems that are arising since the Chief Physician has not restored order to the asylum:
Renee Pelagie
Your charge here is to bring order to an unruly
hospital. And instead--on your watch--the patients
revolt . . .

(Wright 48)

Solution as it relates to Chaos:

If Dr. Royer-Collard could lift the restrictions he places on his wife, perhaps she would not be so prone to infidelity; Dr. Royer-Collard following Napoleon's orders to contain The Marquis, and in turn, Coulmier following the Dr.'s orders to prevent The Marquis from writing, causes problems that would most likely not have occurred if he had been allowed to continue on with his anarchistic work.

Focus as it relates to Perception:

Doctor Royer-Collard perceives Monsieur Prouix to be an architect he can take into his confidence; in Monsieur Prouix' view, Madame Royer-Collard is passionately in love with him; Madeleine gives the appearance of a girl who knows her way around a cell block; Renee discerns her money is being put to Doctor Royer-Collard's personal use instead of toward refurbishing Charenton; and so forth.

Direction as it relates to Actuality:

In actuality, Madame Royer-Collard cuckolds Doctor Royer-Collard with Monsieur Prouix to show her husband he can't keep her in a gilded cage; Upon her death, Madeleine's body is examined and her virginity is determined intact; While Doctor Royer-Collard attempts to demonstrate to Renee that her money is being put to good use, she sees the way things really are and threatens him with her lawyer; and so forth.

Stipulation as it relates to Becoming:

The more Dr. Royer-Collard and his colleagues attempt to rebuild the reputation of Charenton, specifically by reforming The Marquis, the more it is clear the asylum embodies the very essence of The Marquis.

Catalyst as it relates to State of Being:

The Marquis explains how his true self has facilitated his writing career:
The Marquis
Hell itself is the crucible in which I forged my
craft. . . . There, stripped of all postures, man't
true self surges to the fore!

(Wright 28-29)

The Marquis' essential nature is repugnant to society, and the reason why his wife is ostracized. This humiliation coupled with her own social nature is what compels Renee to offer Dr. Royer-Collard money to keep The Marquis from spreading the word; It is Madame Royer-Collard's sexual nature that necessitated her husband to accept the post at Charenton in the first place; Bouchon cannot control his essential nature once he hears The Marquis' latest tale and tortures Madeleine to death, compelling Dr. Royer-Collard to accelerate the process of destroying Sade; and so forth.

Inhibitor as it relates to Conditioning:

Because Dr. Royer-Collard is accustomed to having his orders implemented with success, he does not immediately envision the most effective way for Coulmier to silence The Marquis; Madeleine is conditioned to question authority and side with The Marquis. This is why she does not immediately tell Dr. Royer-Collard the truth about how The Marquis is disseminating his stories, thus slowing progress toward stopping him; and so forth.

Goal as it relates to Conceptualizing:

Envisioning a plan that can be implemented to stop The Marquis from disseminating his stories to the general public is the objective story goal.

Consequence as it relates to Understanding:

The goal of implementing a plan to stop The Marquis from spinning his tales fails, resulting in Doctor Royer-Collard understanding he is not fit to remain in his post as Chief Physician, and he also understands from reading one of The Marquis' tales that his wife is carrying on with the architect. The Abbe de Coulmier understands he is now as mad as The Marquis:
Coulmier
Let them conduct their experiments with all due
haste. I need . . . proof, Doctor . . . proof positive
for the sake of my soul . . . I am not of his ilk.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
When the lab provides its findings, then I'm certain
you shall be released.
 
Coulmier
Released? (A fast blackout, followed by the
rumbling echo of the door as it slams . . . the turning
of a padlock.)

(Wright 78)

Cost as it relates to Memory:

Society's memory of The Marquis' notorious acts cost Renee Pelagie her social position:
Renee Pelagie
Perhaps you are not yet familiar with husband, and
his unusual case.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
. . . His name?
 
Renee Pelagie
I cannot bring myself to say it, Doctor. Its cost
has been so dear. . . . I dared hope that my husband's
incarceration would allow him to fade from the
country's memory . . . . But something prevents
this happy turn of events.

(Wright 10,12)

Dividend as it relates to The Past:

Renee Pelagie retrieves the social position she has enjoyed in the past:
Renee Pelagie
. . . Only yesterday I attended a christening. . . .
From "Satan's Bride" to "Godmother" in one
fell swoop! Society may be a capricious mistress,
but in me she has found a most willing slave!
Ta-ta!

(Wright 74)

Requirements as it relates to Becoming:

Renee Pelagie must become desperate enough to return to society that she is willing to pay to have her husband stopped; Dr. Royer-Collard and Abbe de Coulmier must become so incensed by The Marquis' depravity that they are provoked to devise a plan to stop his writing; and so forth.

Prerequisites as it relates to Obtaining:

Renee Pelagie must obtain the funds necessary to bribe Dr. Royer-Collard; Dr. Royer-Collard must obtain the position of Chief Physician of the Charenton Asylum; Abbe de Coulmier must possess sole custody of The Marquis.

Preconditions as it relates to The Subconscious:

Examples of preconditions imposed on the story's requirement of becoming are Renee Pelagie's desire to return to her place in society; Sade's ability to discern peoples' basic drives and desires:
The Marquis
Surely, if such phenomena exist in nature, then
they are fair game in fiction . . .
 
Coulmier
You expect me to believe these atrocities occur?
 
The Marquis
We don't run in the same circles, do we, my cherub?
. . . If they can be dreamt, they can be done.

(Wright 24-25)

Forewarnings as it relates to The Future:

As an example of how the future describes the imminent approach of the story consequences, The Marquis' tale of a romantic triangle is a thinly disguised account of Madame Royer-Collard's affair with the architect-- and its meaning is not lost on Dr. Royer-Collard:
Coulmier
I can't help noticing that this particular tale has
affected you more than the rest.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
Though I'm loathe to admit it, as a result of his
persistence, his writing has improved. It now
boasts a certain . . . prescience . . . it didn't
have before.

(Wright 62)


THE SUBJECTIVE STORY THROUGHLINE:

Throughline Synopsis:

Coulmier and The Marquis begin their relationship as administrator and inmate, respectively. Coulmier is benevolent toward his notorious charge, making sure The Marquis enjoys his creature comforts while interred. When it is brought to his attention The Marquis has been busy producing pornography, Coulmier willingly accepts the task to reform him. It is during this process that The Marquis provokes Coulmier into questioning the accepted definition of morality, and the act of censoring an artist's work. The Marquis' flagrant use of pornography, and his limitless imagination in how to produce it, drives Coulmier to using the utmost extreme measures to end the man's writing career--which in turn drives himself over the edge.

Backstory:

Abbe de Coulmier is the only member of the hospital staff that has willingly supervised Charenton's most notorious patient, The Marquis de Sade. This came about as follows:
Dr. Royer-Collard: The Ministry informs me that The Marquis falls under your exclusive dominion.
Coulmier
My brethren found him too taxing a patient. A
few of the priests were so dispirited, they left
the order. Father Lely now slaughters pigs in
Provence. Father Couvrat is a chimney sweep.
And the late Father Buffier is rumored to have
buried himself alive rather than minister to The Marquis,
in hopes of achieving martyrdom through less rigorous
means.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
And you?
 
Coulmier
I welcome the challenge.

(Wright 14-15)

Domain as it relates to Physics:

The Abbe de Coulmier endeavors to stop The Marquis from penning his tales, however, with each attempt The Marquis finds a new way to invoke his muse.

Concern as it relates to Understanding:

Coulmier and The Marquis come into conflict over their different understanding of art and censorship.

Range as it relates to Senses:

The Marquis takes great pleasure in using his senses to the fullest. He entreats Coulmier to do the same; to get in touch with his own sensuality:
 
The Marquis
Care for a splash of wine, Abbe?
 
Coulmier
Here? Now? It's not yet noon.
 
The Marquis
Conversation, like certain portions of the anatomy,
always run more smoothly when lubricated.

(Wright 23)

Counterpoint as it relates to Interpretation:

Coulmier construes The Marquis' stories as pornography; The Marquis desires his work to be interpreted as literature. This is illustrated in a conversation they engage in after Coulmier has read one of Sade's tales:
The Marquis
By candlelight you licked the words off the paper,
and rolled them around in your mouth. You
swallowed. You succumbed.
 
Coulmier
My interest was professional, sir, not prurient.
 
The Marquis
Did you read every word? Or did you run straight
away to the dog-eared pages?
 
Coulmier
It stirred in me a most pressing desire.
 
The Marquis
To copulate?
 
Coulmier
To bathe. It's offensive, in every realm. A
compendium of perversities. . . . I fear, Marquis,
that sacrilege comes . . . naturally to you . . .
 
The Marquis
But Darling, my novel does not ascribe to the
Bible's precepts, and--as such--it should not
be held to them in your critique.
 
Coulmier
How, then, should I evaluate it? As political allegory,
perhaps? . . .
 
The Marquis
Where does the novel profess to be a political tract?
 
Coulmier
What, then, does it desire to be?
 
The Marquis
LITERATURE, MY PET!
 
Coulmier
Frankly, it even fails as an exercise in craft. Note
the tireless repetition of the words "nipple" and
"pikestaff."

(Wright 24, 26)

Thematic Conflict as it relates to Senses vs. Interpretation:

The conflict between senses and interpretation is explored throughout Coulmier and The Marquis' relationship:
The Marquis
Must we record only those phenomena that ennoble
us as creatures? What unites us, my precious?
. . . Primal desire--that's unchanging!
 
Coulmier
. . . Pray tell, what other constants do you cite?
 
The Marquis
We eat, we shit, we kill, and we die.
 
Coulmier
Your selectivity confirms your contrary nature.
We are also born, we fall in love, we give birth.
May I suggest that you endeavor to write a new
novel which embraces those verities? . . . it might
perform a cathartic function upon its author.
 
The Marquis
How so, my dear?
 
Coulmier
It might assuage your libertine dementia. Your
current prose only aggravates it.
 
The Marquis
If Mother Nature didn't want me to tickle my
own fancy, she would not have provided me with
two industrious hands. I write with one, leaving
the other palm free to enjoy the fruits of the first.
 
Coulmier
He who lives in darkness cowers in the light, while
he who lives in the sun radiates it. Step into the sun
for awhile, Marquis.
 
The Marquis
. . . He who sits in the sun is often blinded by it.
Then, vulnerable and incognizant, he is devoured
by the forces of darkness. Better to stare the
fuckers in the face, yes?
 
Coulmier
And therein lies the path to Happiness?
 
The Marquis
Therein lies survival.

(Wright 28)

Problem as it relates to Order:

The Marquis explains why a structured lifestyle is the source of conflict between Coulmier and him:
The Marquis
Happiness for you, my little kumquat, is achieved
through strict adhesion to Society's mandates. Most
men follow this hackneyed passage; like eager
children set loose on a scavenger hunt, they dart
about in search of the assigned baubles--wives,
offspring, gainful employ, handsome homes--and
when they have accrued them all--viola! The
promised treasure is won--Happiness ensues! But
for me, happiness springs from a different course.

(Wright 28)

Solution as it relates to Chaos:

The Marquis suggests his way of life as an alternative for Coulmier:
The Marquis
. . . But for me, happiness springs from a different course.
 
Coulmier
Which is--?
 
The Marquis
To slice through social artifice, shatter her false
conventions, and become one with Nature's
Cimmerian Tide, where only the ruthless excel,
and where brute force yields its own treasure!
Past etiquette, past decency, past morals . . .

(Wright 28)

Focus as it relates to Inequity:

Coulmier and The Marquis focus their attention on Coulmier's demand that the inmate censor his writing, and The Marquis' belief that the demand is an unfair one:
Coulmier
I'm afraid I have to place certain censures upon
your quill, dear Marquis.
 
The Marquis
Not content to be my jailer, you're now my editor
as well?

(Wright 24)

Direction as it relates to Equity:

As Coulmier announces to The Marquis that he will confiscate his writing materials to stop the proliferation of pornography, the mad author offers a different direction:
Coulmier
We must assuage these perverse fantasies.
 
The Marquis
But don't you agree that my only salvation is to
vent them on paper?

(Wright 29)

Stipulation as it relates to Obtaining:

The more Coulmier takes away from The Marquis, the more he achieves an identity with him:
Dr. Royer-Collard
And how is the patient faring?
 
Coulmier
Poorly. At each extremity, a new wound. . .
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
And you? It must've been an ordeal.
 
Coulmier
At first, it was unbearable. . . . Though repulsed,
I was fueled by the necessity of my actions. And
my horror hardened into resolve. Steel purpose. I
felt a growing . . . interest . . . in the proceedings.

(Wright 66)

Catalyst as it relates to Instinct:

The subjective story accelerates as The Marquis' innate impulse to put his "perverse fantasies" (Wright 29) on paper, and hence into circulation, compels Coulmier to step up his efforts to stop him:
Coulmier
I'm afraid I'll have to confiscate your paper, and
your quill. . .
 
The Marquis
. . . My writing is involuntary, like the beating of
my heart . . . I CAN'T HELP IT!

(Wright 29)

Inhibitor as it relates to Sense of Self:

Coulmier and The Marquis' perception of themselves slows the progress of their relationship. It is extremely important to The Marquis to maintain his self image, so important that he tries to block Coulmier from discovering any vulnerability. Coulmier's perception of himself as a highly moral priest inhibits his understanding of The Marquis' propensity for pornography.

Abbe de Coulmier's THROUGHLINE:

Role:

Asylum Administrator

Description:

Kind; slightly obtuse

Throughline Synopsis:

The Marquis tells the story of the Abbe de Coulmier:
The Marquis Head
. . . There was once a virtuous man called the
Abbe de Coulmier. It was his life's work to
cater to the feeble, with a kind heart and a gentle
hand. Sometimes, when the sun struck his hair
just so, or he tilted his head at a certain angle, you
could almost discern the halo that rested there.
Then, one dark day he encountered a rogue. A
rogue with a habit, it seems, for writing stories. . .
The head of The Marquis begins to laugh. The hands twitter, and clap with glee. Alone in his cell, Coulmier crawls to the window and calls again to the guard
Coulmier
A quill, my good man! A QUILL! A QUILL!

(Wright 80)

Backstory:

Abbe de Coulmier has been administrator for Charenton for quite some time. He believes in using "humanitarian strategies" for dealing with the inmates.

Domain as it relates to Universe:

Abbe de Coulmier's situation in life is that of a minister in an insane asylum. It is at Charenton that he explores good and evil; morality and immorality.

Concern as it relates to The Past:

Coulmier is concerned with treating patients, specifically The Marquis, just as he always has in the past.

Range as it relates to Fate:

Coulmier accepts as his fate the responsibility of taking charge of madmen.

Counterpoint as it relates to Destiny:

It is Coulmier's destiny to come up against The Marquis. Once Coulmier begins his course to rehabilitate the madman, it is inevitable that he will lose himself in the journey.

Thematic Conflict as it relates to Fate vs. Destiny:

Coulmier understands and accepts the inevitable aspects of insanity he must come in contact with in the course of his career, until he grapples with The Marquis.
Coulmier
I pray that Fate never again ushers me through
these portals, or casts my shadow against your
[Charenton's] door.

(Wright 67)

What he doesn't expect is that once he takes on The Marquis, HE is destined to become the madman.

Problem as it relates to Order:

As Coulmier has always handled his charges in a humane manner, it is a problem for the priest to carry out orders to reform The Marquis in ways that are repugnant to him.

Solution as it relates to Chaos:

Had Coulmier revolted against Dr. Royer-Collard's insistence he go against his very nature to accomplish a job, he might not have ended up padlocked in a cell. If he had also allowed some confusion reign in his thoughts, he may have had the flexibility to accept The Marquis' point of view.

Focus as it relates to Thought:

Coulmier's focus is on the process of considering all the anti-ethical methods he is compelled to employ for The Marquis' rehabilitation, including murder:
Dr. Royer-Collard
You've broken his body, true. But what about his
mind? For all we know, it still composes. What
will his next story be, Abbe? Perhaps a tale about a
timorous priest . . .
 
Coulmier
I dare say, Doctor, we can't control his thoughts.
We can only mute their expression.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
Then we have not truly cured him, have we?
 
Coulmier
What murderous act would you have me commit?
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
Finish the job you've begun.
 
Coulmie
These hands cannot . . . will not . . . extinguish life.
 
Dr. Royer-Collard
I had hoped they were the hands of a hero.

(Wright 67)

Direction as it relates to Knowledge:

Coulmier directs his efforts with the authoritative certainty of one who has dealt with the insane for many years, and in addition trusts that his supervisor knows what is the best way to handle The Marquis:
Coulmier
Dear Heavenly Father. I could not render this last
act if it weren't for the knowledge that I'll be setting
this pagan free.

(Wright 71)

Stipulation as it relates to The Future:

The more Coulmier determines he will not be able to administrator to inmates in the way he has done in the past, the more is anxious for a future outside of Charenton:
Coulmier
Good-bye, Doctor. I'll spend one final night in
my quarters here, and tomorrow set out for
regions beyond.

(Wright 67)

Unique Ability as it relates to Fate:

At this particular point in time, it is Abbe de Coulmier's fate to be the one charged with the responsibility of rehabilitating The Marquis. He is unable to meet the demands fate places upon him, and he fails in solving both the objective and subjective problems.

Critical Flaw as it relates to Falsehood:

The Abbe de Coulmier's mistaken thinking that he can rehabilitate The Marquis undermines his efforts to resolve the story problems.

The Marquis de Sade's THROUGHLINE:

Role:

Notorious Inmate

Description:

Brilliant, perverse, witty, anti-hypocritical

Throughline Synopsis:

The Marquis de Sade is a man with an infamous reputation for creating pornography and committing perversions. Depending upon the political climate, he is held up as either a madman or martyr. The latter part of his life is spent in the Charenton Asylum, creating and disseminating his pornographic prose. The authorities of the institution make every attempt to stop him, to no avail. The man is destroyed, but not the author.

Backstory:

The Marquis de Sade is one of the most infamous men in France, as illustrated in a conversation between Dr. Royer-Collard and Sade's wife:
Dr. Royer-Collard
With all due respect, Madame, all of France is
familiar with your husband. . . . I have the strictest
orders, in a writ signed by Napoleon himself, to
contain the man indefinitely.
 
Renee Pelagie
I don't know which has plagued me more. His
grotesque resume of crimes, or their notoriety.
When he mutilated that poor beggar, her backside
forked through like a pastry shell . . . His orgy in
the school yard--those pitiful children, that
lethal pox--

(Wright 10-11)

Domain as it relates to Mind:

The Marquis' fixed attitude toward freely expressing himself is illustrated in a letter to his wife:
"Fanaticism in me is the product of the persecutions I have endured from my tyrants. The longer they continue their vexations, the deeper they root my principles in my heart"

(Wright 6).

Concern as it relates to Memory:

The Marquis de Sade's impact primarily concerns what people recall about his dark deeds--which creates a mythical notoriety--and his stories that are passed on--creating trouble:
Renee Pelagie
His little fable traveled far. One of your wards
told the cook; the cook told his wife; she told the
cobbler; and so on and so on, ad infinitum! Even
now, the story is lumbering toward Paris, like some
carnivorous, hump-backed beast. Who knows what
lascivious behavior it leaves in its wake.

(Wright 49)

Range as it relates to Truth:

The Marquis' literature, although distasteful to some, has the i