Dramatica
Users Group (DUG)
Minutes for May 8, 1998
The DUG meeting began
at 7:10 p.m. Chris Huntley, the meeting's moderator, made the following
announcements:
- The Dramatica Writers
Group (Tuesdays, 7-9 p.m.) was discussed. It's moderator, JD Cochran,
was introduced.
- The FREE 9 week
Dramatica course was well underway but still open to anyone interested
(Mondays, 7-10 p.m.). The instructor, Katy Monahan Huntley, was introduced.
- The Dramatica Mail
List again was highly recommended as a source for Dramatica discussion
and information. Visit the Dramatica website (dramatica.com) for instructions
on signing up.
From approximately
7:15 to 7:45 p.m., Chris answered various Dramatica theory and usage questions
and led discussions on the topics requested. One topic discussed was about
identifying the Subjective Story throughline and, once chosen, understanding
its relationship to the other areas of the Dramatica model. Chris likened
the process to a rock dropping in a pond. The choice you make should be
like the place the rock falls--the source of the disturbance--and its
effects will be felt as ripples through the other areas in the structure.
About 7:45 p.m., the
DUG began its analysis of the film, "Arsenic and Old Lace"
[See
related article Arsenic and Old Lace for a detailed story analysis].
STORY THROUGHLINES
We started by trying
to identify and describe the four throughlines in the film. Identifying
the Objective Story throughline (the "Big Picture") proved to
be illusive. After coming up with over a half dozen different one-line
descriptions, we decided to put that on hold and move on.
The Main Character
was easily identified as Mortimer Brewster (Cary Grant) by a unanimous
vote.
The Obstacle Character
proved more elusive. There were four suggestions made: Jonathan, Mortimer's
creepy brother; the Aunts (together treated as one); the Brewster family
(as a whole excluding Mortimer); and Elaine Harper, Mortimer's new wife.
It was determined that none of these were particularly obvious as Obstacle
Character, so we went on to determine the subject matter of the Subjective
Story. There didn't appear to be many examples of Subjective Story in
the film, so none of the relationships between Mortimer and the potential
Obstacle Characters seemed overtly stronger than the others (though Jonathan
was pretty much ruled out as OC by this point).
It was determined
that we should figure out the Main Character's personal issue/perspective
as a way to better identify the intended Obstacle Character and Subjective
Story. We decided that Mortimer's personal issues grew from being newly
married and the author of two books against marriage, with another one
(unknown to his new wife) in development. With this as his defining issue,
it became apparent that Elaine, his new wife, was the most likely
candidate for the Obstacle Character and their marriage the subject matter
of the Subjective Story throughline.
CHARACTER DYNAMICS
Most everyone agreed
that Mortimer is a Change character. His secretiveness in public
while getting a marriage license at the beginning of the film is contrasted
greatly by his whooping and chasing Elaine into her house (and off to
their honeymoon) at the end of the story.
When it came to the
question of the MC Growth, Stop or Start, the group was split with
a slight majority favoring Stop. Instead of a drawn out debate, we decided
not to answer this and to move on to the next question.
Without any dissension
or argument, the group determined that Mortimer is both a Do-er
and possessed a Male Mental Sex.
STORY DYNAMICS
The Story Driver of
Action v. Decision was determined to be Action--no discussion.
The Story Limit was
also decided to be an Optionlock without much discussion. Chris,
playing devil's advocate, pointed out that there was a one hour timelock
introduced at the beginning of the story (the amount of time Mortimer
and Elaine have before the train leaves), but that it was quickly dismissed
and therefore would not qualify as a story limit.
The Story Judgment
was easily identified as Good.
Though the "feel"
of the Story Outcome indicated that it was a Success, the lack of a clear
Objective Story throughline and Concern suggested that the group leave
this one unanswered until later.
THEMATIC CHOICES
It seemed clear to
most people that Mortimer was a Universe Main Character -- his
problematic situation being a newly married man who is also author of
two well known books against marriage and favoring bachelorhood. This
made Elaine a Mind Obstacle Character which fit but wasn't terribly compelling--she's
just not in the story that much.
This left us with
the struggle to determine where the nebulous Objective Story (and Subjective
Story) would be found. Initially, the group leaned toward Physics due
to the extremely large amount of physical activity in the film--burials,
digging "canals," comings and goings, fights, etc. Chris then
asked a question that related to some of the theory discussion earlier
in the evening, "Are the crazy activities causing the crazy thinking
of the characters, or is the crazy thinking of the characters causing
the crazy activities?" In other words, which is the source of the
difficulties and which is its effects? The nutty thinking is clearly the
source of the whacky behavior. Given that frame of reference, the group
quickly latched on to Psychology (Dysfunctional Family) as the
Objective Story Domain with a Subjective Story Domain of Physics (Getting
Hitched).
The remainder of the
evening was spent in an attempt to narrow the storyform down further without
much success. There were many good arguments for a wide variety (and incompatible)
storyforms. The bottom line was that the film has LOTS of Objective Story
storytelling, but severely lacks storyencoding of the three other throughlines.
The last ten to fifteen
minutes of the DUG were used to discuss ONE of the possible storyforms
for Arsenic and Old Lace. [See
Arsenic and Old Lace Storyform for the Dramatica story engine settings.]
Next month's film,
"In The Company Of Men."
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