Dramatica
Users Group (DUG)
Minutes 3/12/98
The DUG started late
due to the extended length of this week's film, Aliens. The meeting
was led by Chris Huntley who briefly covered the following topics:
- UCLA Extension
class taught by Melanie Anne Phillips nearing it's completion.
- Free nine week
Dramatica class beginning April 6 to be taught by Katy Monahan Huntley.
- Dramatica message
board hosted by Melanie Anne Phillips.
- Cool, new Dramatic
Mail Server hosted by Dramatica users.
- Dramatica Writers'
Group meetings.
Chris introduced several
people attending the meeting: Katy Monahan Huntley, Dramatica Pro 3 story
examples editor and future instructor of free Dramatica class; JD Cochran,
Screenplay Systems marketing rep and leader of the Dramatica Writers'
Group; Sandy Stone, certified Dramatica consultant and on-line Dramatica
course instructor; Mark Haslett, former Screenplay Systems employee and
Dramatica maven who is now Vice President of development for Cunnigham
Productions (and looking for a good horror script to produce).
The bulk of the meeting
was spent discussing and analyzing the feature film, Aliens (1986),
written and directed by James (Titanic) Cameron. [See
related article Aliens for a detailed story analysis] Instead
of analyzing the released version, the Special Edition (Director's Cut)
was used because it had more Main Character and Subjective Story material
than the original. Even with the extra twenty minutes of material, identifying
the storyform was no picnic.
As usual, we began
the analysis by attempting to identify the four throughlines (Objective
Story, Subjective Story, Main Character, and Obstacle Character) in the
story. All agreed that Ripley is the Main Character -- no dissent there.
Identifying the Objective Story throughline was more difficult. "Recon
of the situation on planet LB426" and "A Bughunt" were
suggested as possible throughline generalizations. There were two candidates
for the Obstacle Character as well: Burke and Newt (the aliens and the
Queen Alien were suggested but soon removed from consideration). The subject
matter of the Subjective Story throughline was unclear at this point and
no solid suggestions were made.
Leaving those issues
unresolved, we moved to identifying the Objective Characters and their
functions. Only one Dramatica archetype was identified. Hudson (Bill Paxton)
is the Emotion character (feeling and uncontrolled). The rest were moderately
complex characters, difficult to determine because the Story Goal was
still not established and somewhat fuzzy (Save the colonists? Retrieve
the aliens? Find out what was happening on LB426?).
From there we moved
on to the story dynamics which, for the most part, were determined fairly
quickly. We then we proceeded to identify the Objective Story Domain (Physics)
and the Main Character Domain (Universe). The OS Concern (aka Story Goal)
wasn't nearly as obvious as the MC Concern of the Past. It was a matter
of minutes until the group had determined a storyform for Aliens. [See
Alien Storyform for the Dramatica story engine settings.]
Upon discussing the
various aspects of the story engine settings (storyform report) for Aliens,
there was a general consensus that the storyform was a strong contender.
It was also noted by several group members that the Obstacle Character
throughline was sketchily drawn, and that some aspects of the storyform
were only vaguely illustrated, but clearly implied.
Next month's film,
"Il Postino," (The Postman--not related to the American
made film of the same name starring Kevin Costner).
The DUG meeting officially
ended at 10:15 p.m., a bit later than usual.
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