Dramatica
Users Group (DUG)
Minutes for July 8, 1998
The DUG began shortly
after 7:00 p.m. led by Chris Huntley. The film analyzed was "Planet
of the Apes."
About 7:10 p.m., the
DUG began its analysis of the film, "Planet of the Apes"
[See
related article Planet of the Apes for a detailed story analysis].
We started out by
identifying the four throughlines.
Taylor, the character
played by Charlton Heston, was readily identified as the story's Main
Character.
Identifying the Objective
Story throughline was not so easy. After much discussion, it was determined
that the OS throughline was thematically about "social classes based
on genetics" (orangutans, chimpanzees, gorillas, and humans) and
plotwise about a "talking human in an ape society."
There were three nominations
for Obstacle Character: Dr. Zaius; the chimpanzees Zira and Cornelius
collectively; and Nova. Nova was quickly ruled out because it was virtually
impossible to determine what perspective she held which is a requirement
for an Obstacle Character. Though Zira and Cornelius play a large part
in Taylor's experience in captivity, we ultimately opted for Dr. Zaius
as the Obstacle Character. He clearly has a well-defined world view that
is distinctly different from that of Taylor's.
The Subjective Story
throughline was determined to be thematically about Man's place in the
universe or the true nature of Man (depending on your interpretation of
the material), with Taylor and Dr. Zaius clearly at odds on the subject.
Once the throughines
had been identified, several of the dynamic questions were quickly answered:
MC Approach:
Do-er -- Taylor is clearly a man of action preferring physical responses
over internal responses.
Story Driver:
Action -- The crash landing starts the story off; the capture; Taylor
speaks; etc.
Story Limit:
Optionlock -- There are only so many ways that the Ape society can
rid itself of a talking man, or the inverse version, there are only
so many ways that Taylor can try to fit into the Ape society (or any
society on the planet of the Apes).
Story Judgment:
Bad -- Taylor is clearly not a happy camper at the end of the story.
Three of the remaining
four dynamic questions were big bones of contention: MC Resolve -- Change
or Steadfast; MC Mental Sex -- Male or Female; and Story Outcome -- Success
or Failure. We opted to put our differences on hold for a moment and move
onto the thematic choices leaving these dynamic questions unanswered.
The Objective Story
Domain was easily identified as Universe -- a situation. A talking human
in an ape society and the potential disruptions to the ape's social stratification
fell neatly into a Universe Domain. The Subjective Story Domain, by default,
fell in the Mind class -- the clash of attitudes between Taylor and Dr.
Zaius over Man's place and his true nature.
The Main Character
Domain became Physics -- Taylor's efforts to free himself and find a place
in the 'world', while the Obstacle Character Domain became Psychology
-- Dr. Zaius' adept manipulations of facts and doing what was expedient
had profound impact on Taylor and Taylor's condition.
To make a long evening
short, we eventually came up with two different storyforms that described
two different interpretations of the film.
In version A, Taylor
and crew come to the planet ruled by apes and disrupt the status quo.
In this version Taylor is the antagonist and the story goal is to protect
the status quo. At the end of the film, the apes SUCCEED in ridding themselves
of Taylor and the evidence of talking humans -- status quo is restored.
Also in this version, Taylor uses MALE mental sex problem solving techniques
and ultimately CHANGEs from a bitter loner who couldn't care less for
his home world, to a humanist appalled by mankind's self-destruction.
[See
Planet of the Apes Storyform A for the Dramatica story engine
settings.]
In version B, Taylor
and crew come to the planet with the intention of taking over, "We'll
be running this place in six months!" Taylor is the protagonist and
Dr. Zaius is the antagonist. At the end of the film, Taylor FAILs to fit
into the new world, much less take control of it, and escapes with Nova
to start over. Also in this version, Taylor uses FEMALE mental sex problem
solving techniques and ultimately remains STEADFAST in his determination
to find someplace better than where he was. [See
Planet of the Apes Storyform B for the Dramatica story engine
settings.]
Both versions have
strengths and weaknesses which can be seen in the similar, yet different
storyforms.
Two interesting observations
were made about the film that might be responsible for the different interpretations.
The film is very spare in its storytelling. By being so, single events
may or may not have multiple meanings in different contexts, what Melanie
Anne Phillips (co-create of the Dramatica theory) calls "multi-appreciation
moments." As such, much is left up to the audience to sort out the
different "meanings" an event may contain, leaving room for
(mis)interpretation. Regarding the differing opinions about Taylor's mental
sex, it was suggested that the confusion or mixed-messages found in the
film may have two possible sources. The script, early versions written
by Rod Serling, may have originally been written with a female mental
sexed main character. Subsequent writers and, perhaps, Charlton Heston
himself may have modified Taylor to exhibit more male mental sexed behavior.
The second hypothesis was that it reflected the social confusion regarding
mental sex of the times. We didn't have anything specific to back that
up but it sounded good.
Next month's film,
"A Room With A View."
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